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  1. #31
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jay Greenstein View Post
    Hope this helps.
    Jay, unfortunately, it doesn't.

    But again, thanks! I appreciate the time you spent trying to help me, even if we do speak a different language.

    Good luck!



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    Quote Originally Posted by John Oberon View Post
    ...he checked the doghouse, then played the light out over the length of Smokey’s chain.

    You kinda led me to believe the chain was bolted to the doghouse, or at least very close to it. It was easily inferred.

    John, I went back to this section and fixed it. It WAS more than a paint scratch . . . more like another crunched fender, lol. I should've caught that. Thanks, again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Tinman View Post
    Jay, unfortunately, it doesn't.

    But again, thanks! I appreciate the time you spent trying to help me, even if we do speak a different language.

    Good luck!
    My apologies to Jay! My last response was curt and dismissive. That wasn't my intention. Jay's critiques perplex me, so I don't know how to respond. Since there is no way I'm aware of to edit or delete a comment, this is my apology. In case Jay doesn't see this I also sent him a PM. Again, sorry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rogue Mutt View Post
    Speaking of monotone, amiright? Hahaha
    Jealousy doesn't become you kid.

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    Jealousy doesn't become you kid.
    Jay's imitation of Paul Newman in "The Sting."

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    Quote Originally Posted by jayce View Post
    Jay's imitation of Paul Newman in "The Sting."
    Ha.

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