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    Need help with a plot hole

    I'm writing something about some teens who are descendants of greek gods. I need a reason to keep the main character semi-involved with her human ex-boyfriend. I need there to still be feelings and some type of relationship but they can't be exclusive. What could be something that would tie her and her ex together, but not be so strong that she would be overly attached to him.

    Idk if any of that makes sense; I'm thinking out loud.

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    Rogue Mutt
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    Maybe you should read those Percy Jackson books.

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    A joint project might do it, or they're co-workers, or members of a sports team.

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    Maybe the boyfriend knows a secret about her and she wants to keep him close enough to ensure he doesn't spill the beans.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ken Magee View Post
    Maybe the boyfriend knows a secret about her and she wants to keep him close enough to ensure he doesn't spill the beans.
    I like that idea

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    What if the MC has to leave her family behind and she asked the ex-boyfriend to watch over them. They still have feelings for each other, but he knows or understands why she had to leave even though she may not have told her family.
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