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  1. #11
    Rogue Mutt
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    The Peeling sounds like a book about killer mutant potatoes or something. Which if that's not what it is I should go write a movie script for the Syfy Channel.

    Quote Originally Posted by The Tinman View Post
    I'm back. It only took a few hours to read The Peeling. I give it 1 1/2 out of 5 stars. It was in desperate need of an editor. The main problems, IMO: very weak characterizations, too much introspection, and it was 80% Tell. Also, too many instances where the verb and subject disagree -- plural subject with singular verb, and vice versa.

    On the bright side, at least I didn't waste $5 on this story, as Gilfindel did on his, lol.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Rogue Mutt View Post
    The Peeling sounds like a book about killer mutant potatoes or something. Which if that's not what it is I should go write a movie script for the Syfy Channel.
    Lol @ Rogue Mutt. My son loves those horrible movies. He watches them for laughs.

    Btw: it probably would have been a better book if it had been about killer potatoes

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