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    Greed

    Head bowed down, eyes cast their gaze
    Towards the floor and time stands still
    While troubled conscience battles will
    And fights to justify the days

    Of stolen love, scorched hot with fear
    A heat that steals normality
    And questions all morality
    As depserate longing settles here


    (Not necessarily for critique. This was written a long time ago, as most of my poems. Just felt like sharing and maybe prompt some action on these forums! )



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    no critiquing Debbi but one - "Desperate" was misspelled....

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    Oops! That's what comes from sneaking a quick post in at work without letting the boss see what I am doing! I didn't cut and paste - I was typing it!!!

    And now it is too late to edit! Aaargh.

    Apologies

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