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  1. #11
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    Stoke on Trent, UK
    Quote Originally Posted by ilkar View Post
    My favorite style is using I to narrate
    That's called "first person" POV

    Just sayin'.... ;-)

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    Southern Georgia
    Aeslynn, like the story. The beginning isn't too dark. But I agree with John on the back and forth of the story and backstory. Try working the backstory in a little at a time into the present.

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