A writing coach received my chapter that included these sentences:
When I agreed to live with Nick, I neglected to point out that I expected this step would lead to marriage. I might start a sentence, “After we’re married this or when we’re married that.”
She changed it to:
When I agreed to live with Nick, I neglected to point out that I expected this step would lead to marriage. I might start a sentence, “After we’re married this or when we’re married that”.
I think she is wrong, but have not been able to find an example that proves either point.
In simple language, what is the rule?