A way to replace one of my character's traits so that it's appropriate for kids

[Sunayna Prasad]

I have been thinking that because my book is middle grade, it may not be appropriate to have an alcoholic character at the beginning, even if you never see him actually drink and it's a very minor element. It may be okay for mature 11-12-year-olds, but I can't imagine many parents letting kids 9-10, maybe even eleven letting their kids read a book where a character is an alcoholic. I still want him to be tough, unfriendly, and irresponsible. But in a way where there won't be controversy over whether it's appropriate for MG readers or not. Any suggestions?

[Sunayna Prasad]

Can someone move this thread to Brainstorming? I think that may be a better forum for this topic.

[Kelouise]

He can still be tough, unfriendly, and irresponsible without being an alcoholic. Just portray his character flaws though his dialogue and attitude towards other characters. If you really want him to have a vice, you could maybe get away with implying his alcoholism, or just give him something else he "needs". Depending on the tone of the book, it could be silly or a little darker. Like, he has to spend hours working on his car, he's a couch potato, fashion obsessed, addicted to spending money, eats a lot, a neat freak, or a complete slob... Etc.