dying....

[Amy Lou]

Just a little something

dying .....


suffocating in irrelevance

wasting in disconnect

losing against control

mind shrinking

no thoughts worth considering
heart souring

no love worth fighting

smiling through
novocaine existence

withering to nothing
significant to him

[jayce]

Amy!!!... this is so... sad!

[Amy Lou]

Aww Jayce!! Didn't mean to make you sad!

I'll post another that will brighten things up a bit! I'm really not that sad, have been before, but not today! LOL

[C Bets]

This read more like a suicide note than a simple dying epilogue. Was that your intent?

[Amy Lou]

OH NO! Cindy lol, it's not a suicide note nor really a dying epilogue. Well the dying of ones spirit (mind, soul, heart), not body. A past, controlling relationship can cause you to feel this way. Too heavy, huh? LOL

[C Bets]

No, no - I can see both. My mind was set on the physical while reading, though, and I kept thinking of this poor woman who is getting ready to end it all because her man is a schmuk. Sinking into a severe depression, however, is also obvious. It covers it all!

[Miranda Clementine]

The "significant" to him really made it sting. Told me exactly what is going on here. I so saw it as a relationship gone bad, and in the end it was because of either a controlling person or clingy. But because usually clingy people don't make you depressed so, yes, I thought controlling. So sad.

[Amy Lou]

Hi Miranda, glad you got the vibe here and that it made you sad, I guess it did it's job Thanks for reading girl!
Cindy~ thanks again for reading and for looking at it from the perspective I offered.