Thanks for taking a look Amy. The book is obviously a satire that deals modern-day relationships and actually, a great deal with the coporate world. Well you know, this episode more or less occurred years ago during a vacation in Ocean City MD... hmmm.. that's another story entirely. I didn't catch the "rum and ice" thing. It's so easy to overlook them sometimes when you're writing. Thanks for pointing that out! Some things like Wetterman and Rosa Cruz was gone over in earlier in the book, so you'd definitely hava handle on that. I'll consider all your suggestions Amy, and thanks again!


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