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  1. #11
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    Dang italics, but you get my drift.



  2. #12
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    Accidental vegetable copulation? I don't know what that means.
    Depends on where and how fast you sit down.

    Josh, your introductory sentence is overwhelmingly long. However, "Sharon was born to be a dancer" is not much of a hook.

    This--"SHARON WORLD (92,000 words) is the memoir of a life filled with chaos, self-discovery and accidental vegetable copulation" is unclear. Whose life are you describing?

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