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  1. #31
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    Hey look, I signed up with a new account and voilà, I have my old stats back. Yea me!



  2. #32
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    the opener beats the crap out of 'it was a dark and stormy night', but yeh, put your claws on and grab us. also breaks (of which i am incredibly guilty, so i should just stop here).

  3. #33
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    In the short bit that you have here, there is a lot of well-written dialogue, and well-conceived verbal swordplay between the characters, but I really feel like the characters are in a vacuum, and the reader hasn't been given any reason to like one or any of them, except maybe that the reader has something in common with them (boldness/impulsiveness/etc. ) but interesting, and promising.

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