Elemental Touch: The Guardians of Magic (revised prologue)

[martin shaw]

Jonathan no! Slappy wristy. There is no such Rupert Murdoch as ‘science of the world.’

I really must endeavour to swing you round by your sock, caught on your vampiristic hooked type toenails and bludgeon you against multi-storey concrete car park support beams.

[C Bets]

Jonathan no! Slappy wristy. There is no such Rupert Murdoch as ‘science of the world.’

I really must endeavour to swing you round by your sock, caught on your vampiristic hooked type toenails and bludgeon you against multi-storey concrete car park support beams.

Martin, Martin, Martin. I have to confess, I usually end up reading your posts three or four times, and then I still may not be able to wrap my sometimes simplistic brain around what you say. Did you drive your mother crazy as a little boy? (Don't get me wrong; it doesn't stop me from reading -- most of the time I end up chuckling, you have such a way with words and creating my very own visual.)

[Amy Lou]

I have to agree, Cindy. He has a gift for creating visuals.

And I too have to read his comments several times before I get it, sometimes even look up his words! LOL

[martin shaw]

Yes I was molested.

You are coherent and I am not worthy of your summary.

Hello to you, Mrs C

[martin shaw]

Hey Looby Lou!

[martin shaw]

Our friend J is a man on a mission to be discarded in a slush-pile before elevenses.

[Amy Lou]

Hey Looby Lou!

Hey rubber ducky!

[martin shaw]

Elevens's!

[leslee]

I wish you could see the rest of the book to get a better picture of what I'm really trying to do with this story. The prologue by itself really doesn't do it justice.

You are not required to use a prologue. If you know it isn't up to the quality of the book, don't use it.

I wish you could see the rest of the book to get a better picture of what I'm really trying to do with this story.

So post a page and let us get a "better picture."

[Amy Lou]

Elevens's!

? Dont get it.