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  1. #11
    martin shaw
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    Jonathan no! Slappy wristy. There is no such Rupert Murdoch as ‘science of the world.’

    I really must endeavour to swing you round by your sock, caught on your vampiristic hooked type toenails and bludgeon you against multi-storey concrete car park support beams.



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    Quote Originally Posted by martin shaw View Post
    Jonathan no! Slappy wristy. There is no such Rupert Murdoch as ‘science of the world.’

    I really must endeavour to swing you round by your sock, caught on your vampiristic hooked type toenails and bludgeon you against multi-storey concrete car park support beams.
    Martin, Martin, Martin. I have to confess, I usually end up reading your posts three or four times, and then I still may not be able to wrap my sometimes simplistic brain around what you say. Did you drive your mother crazy as a little boy? (Don't get me wrong; it doesn't stop me from reading -- most of the time I end up chuckling, you have such a way with words and creating my very own visual.)
    Cindy

    And be at peace... the universe is unfolding as it should

  3. #13
    Amy Lou
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    I have to agree, Cindy. He has a gift for creating visuals.

    And I too have to read his comments several times before I get it, sometimes even look up his words! LOL

  4. #14
    martin shaw
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    Yes I was molested.

    You are coherent and I am not worthy of your summary.

    Hello to you, Mrs C

  5. #15
    martin shaw
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    Hey Looby Lou!

  6. #16
    martin shaw
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    Our friend J is a man on a mission to be discarded in a slush-pile before elevenses.

  7. #17
    Amy Lou
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    Quote Originally Posted by martin shaw View Post
    Hey Looby Lou!
    Hey rubber ducky!

  8. #18
    martin shaw
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    Elevens's!

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    I wish you could see the rest of the book to get a better picture of what I'm really trying to do with this story. The prologue by itself really doesn't do it justice.

    You are not required to use a prologue. If you know it isn't up to the quality of the book, don't use it.

    I wish you could see the rest of the book to get a better picture of what I'm really trying to do with this story.

    So post a page and let us get a "better picture."

  10. #20
    Amy Lou
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    Quote Originally Posted by martin shaw View Post
    Elevens's!
    ? Dont get it.

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