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  1. #1
    Aver0n 2o11
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    On Dreams

    "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
    "Calm down sweetheart, it's just a dream."
    "Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"
    "There there darling."
    *sniff* *sniff*

    Little Jimmy can't yet express what he saw in words.
    His mother is too tired to ask.

    "Hahaha. Ah, hahaha. hahahaaaaaaa!"
    "What's so funny?"
    "He's just dreaming Jessica."
    "I'm tryna do my homework."
    "Let him rest darling."

    Little Jimmy can't yet express what he saw in words.
    His sister is getting annoyed at his unconsious outbursts.

    "ehhhh, goooo. ehhhh, gaaaa. ehhhh, chaaa."
    "Our little boy is talking."
    "He's sleeping, dear."
    "I'm so proud of him."
    "He's annoying."
    "Let him sleep, Jessica."

    Little Jimmy can't yet express what he saw in words that adults may understand.
    His father is pleased with the language in his spontaneous outbursts
    His sister is annoyed at him.
    His mother is just tired.



  2. #2
    martin shaw
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    Re: On Dreams

    Well, it's different, though hard to find the message for a decent point of view. It maybe a mixture of feelings that I can't quite grasp

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