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  1. #1
    martin shaw
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    A Way to a Mans Heart is Through His Belly.

    I used to love her
    but I had to kill her.
    I used my rifle and I
    I used my drill, err-a-ha-ha-ha!

    I used to want her
    but I had to eat her
    because I was hungry and I
    I didn’t have my dinner, err-a-ha-ha-ha!

    I used to lick her,
    but I gots to chew her
    and I used her nipples for the
    the topping on my pizza, err-a-ha-ha-ha!

    I got a new girl now
    and I’ve tried to keep her.
    She’s in my freezer with the
    the rest of the meat, err-a-ha-ha-ha!



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    Re: A Way to a Mans Heart is Through His Belly.

    That is disturbing but funny at the same time lol
    “Put it before them briefly so they will read it, clearly so they will appreciate it, picturesquely so they will remember it and, above all, accurately so they will be guided by its light.”
    -Joseph Pulitzer

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    Re: A Way to a Mans Heart is Through His Belly.

    The only way to make this poem more controvercial would be to make his to-be-eaten lover a male and then we can have the homosexuality is questionable debate

    But coming from the view point of a female praying mantis, this poem is completely normal

    I love that you kept the words/lyrics simple, compared with other of your poems that tend to have longe rand more complicated words in them -D

  4. #4
    martin shaw
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    Re: A Way to a Mans Heart is Through His Belly.

    Hey, thanks you two.

    Yes GM, I did keep it simple, though not on purpose. It's all I had in me

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