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  1. #1
    martin shaw
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    The Daily Holocaust

    In the dead of night, I am dead,
    My wife is dead
    My kids are dead,
    and my dog sure smells dead.

    In the light of morning, I am half dead.
    But my wife is still dead.
    My kids are still dead,
    and my dog smells like he’s still dead.

    I am enjoying the aftermath of holocaust days.



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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    (tu)



  3. #3
    martin shaw
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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    Thank you, Lea. May the winds blow in your favour: a kiss! And a glass of lemon and lime.



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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    Er... beautiful poem but what's with the holocaust reference?



  5. #5
    Amy Lou
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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    I like it too Shawn. It's twisted right? Otherwise why would he being enjoying the holocaust days?



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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    Hey, did you contact AllExperts?



  7. #7
    martin shaw
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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    Hey, leslee. I found it hard to follow, so I've joined a Muslim group.

    Thaks a lot, and thanks a lot for your help.



  8. #8
    Cat
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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    And how do your wife, kids and dog feel about this?

    It's creepy.



  9. #9
    martin shaw
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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    Dogs ok



  10. #10
    martin shaw
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    Re: The Daily Holocaust

    Thanks Amy
    and GM, similie... Holocaust, and life in the day time before everyone sleeps.

    However, I do see the ending as week myself.

    Thanks GM, you poet waiting to spring your stuff on us, like one of the spinning paint picture making things at the fair



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