HomeWritersLiterary AgentsEditorsPublishersResourcesDiscussion
Forum Login | Join the discussion
+ Reply to Thread
Page 2 of 2 FirstFirst 1 2
Results 11 to 13 of 13

Thread: 2022 (sample)

  1. #11
    Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2010
    Location
    Vancouver
    Posts
    77

    Re: 2022 (sample)

    Julian Hulls Wrote:
    -------------------------------------------------------
    > Dude? Are you like a teacher or something, I want
    > a critique not a friggin' breakdown of each
    > gramatical mistake. Just say it's child-like @#$%&
    > if that's what you mean, what is a friggin
    > proofreader for? Read it mate, theres a clue it's
    > titled chapter twelve! Is it boring or is it just
    > so bad, tell me!


    I stopped reading after the first paragraph. Does that make you feel better?



  2. #12
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    Location
    Rhinebeck, NY
    Posts
    4,623

    Re: 2022 (sample)

    "Dude? Are you like a teacher or something, I want a critique not a friggin' breakdown of each gramatical mistake. Just say it's child-like @#$%& if that's what you mean, what is a friggin proofreader for?"

    Julian, it's bad form for newbies to come charging in like gangbusters. After all, the advice you receive here costs you nary a cent.

    *_*

  3. #13
    Senior Member Diane Theron's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Location
    Ontario, Canada
    Posts
    305
    This looks like an old thread but what the hell. The atittude is not in question - the writer asked for content interest, so here goes.

    I rather liked it - I was intrigued at the threat to fishermen and the emotions that the guys with guns were feeling. I felt it.

    My 5c

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts