Simple Enough??

[Smiling Curmudgeon]

Author,

Last night I wrote a lengthy reply. I messed something up and it didn't post. That's just as well, because I see very little separating this excerpt and all the others you've posted.

Pick one story. Post an excerpt. Absorb comments. Edit it based on comments you think are useful, and post an updated version. Repeat as necessary. You're spiing your wheels in my opinion.

Cur

[Cat]

And wasting our time.

I mean, what's the point in our critting your work if you don't use it to improve what you've written?

[Author Pendragin]

I'm not finished with it yet Cat. I will post it as soon as I am done.

[Author Pendragin]

Working on it as we speak.

[Cat]

Alright, then.

[Annie Jefferson]

Hey I think this is realy good, please keep writing I would like to read more of this