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  1. #11
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    Re: Harmattan (Poem)

    time to look up delusional in the dictionary.



  2. #12
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    Re: Harmattan (Poem)

    Sorry, Zeb. You do have delusions of grandeur. All you care about is seeing your work posted in the *gasp* PUBLISHED WRITERS forum. Because I guess that makes you "published", right? Puh-leeze. Get a grip. And get back on your Haldol.

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    Re: Harmattan (Poem)

    I'm so glad someone finally told me what matters in literature.

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    Harmattan (Poem)

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  5. #15
    martin shaw
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    Re: Harmattan (Poem)

    Burrows
    Into marrows of bones. In to the marrow of bones
    Chill cascades
    Into crannies of ........... Nooks rather than crannies, perhaps?
    Blanket bound bodies.
    Goose bumps grow,
    Teeth chatter.
    Harmatthan

    With vagaries and vicissitudes
    Violate vegetation. ............................................with blood!
    Arable lands are made arid,
    Horizon in haze hidden.



    Already harangued by hullabaloo
    And humbugs of vote hunters,
    By leaders lawless,
    We live with chill,
    We live with shoulders hunched.
    We are chilled also
    By violent vagabonds.
    We are chilled now
    By Harmattan

    Needs work, but interesting read.
    Second half loses me

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