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  1. #11
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    Re: Dialogue

    "Stomping up the stairs too angry to speak . . ."

    The stairs were angry?



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    Re: Dialogue

    Mark, Thank you for your encouragement. You have no idea how much your critiquing/suggestions and especially your kind words mean to me. I'm still working hard at editing this one, but I'd love to know what you'd think of the whole thing.

    S.Raven - I didn't know that. Thanks for pointing out how strong canvas is. I have changed it and used your idea of having him bash it against the railing of the stairs instead. I appreciate you letting me know about that.

    Leslee - Sometimes stairs just have a bad day. I've changed it. Good catch.

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