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  1. #11
    Rogue Mutt
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    Re: Critcism Required

    John Oberon Wrote:
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    > and you
    > think yours reads better than mine.
    >
    That's the greatest sin of all!



  2. #12
    martin shaw
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    Re: Critcism Required

    Zooey, Zooey, the coppers are after you.
    When they catch you, they’ll give you a year or two.
    They’ll tie you up with cotton
    and slap your naughty bottom.
    So ring your bell
    and pedal like hell
    on a bicycle made for two.

  3. #13
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    Re: Critcism Required

    Hey John

    You seem upset. Don’t take offence. I did ask for criticism and I did say you made good points. I may be in a minority of one but I prefer mine. I might be deluded, but hey.

    Martin

    Nicely done!

  4. #14
    martin shaw
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    Re: Critcism Required

    Hey, Rogue Mute.

    There was a wee wee doggy
    that was a wee wee small.
    She lifted up her wee wee leg
    and wee wee'd up the wall.


    I am mad: I have PTSD: I am bipolar, and I have a compulsive disorder from protecting your spotty civilian asses.

    I am now having a beer and getting drunk, and and and -I still out-think you all, ya bandito's.

  5. #15
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    Re: Critcism Required

    It's the same ol' WN.

  6. #16
    Senior Member John Oberon's Avatar
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    Re: Critcism Required

    Zooey,

    The idea that I'm upset is just about as accurate as your view that your post reads better than mine. I don't know you, You don't know me. I don't even know if you're a man or a woman. There's nothing you could write to me that could ever upset me in the least. Cyber shadows never disconcert me in any way; only people I know and love can upset me.

    I simply wished you good luck in your "writing", which includes wrong words, wrong punctuation, clutter, and bad construction. With that kind of writing, you'll need a lot of luck.

    Sooo...good luck.

  7. #17
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    Re: Critcism Required

    Hey John.

    That's cool.

    Thanks.

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