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  1. #81
    Laura M
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    Re: Peep Show Girl

    Thanks Jeanne! That's very clear and helpful.



  2. #82
    Ronda Hamilton
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    Re: Peep Show Girl

    Jeanne thank you so much for that thoughtful and helpful post
    Dialogue is actually my biggest struggle. The last section I posted was the last of the heavy dialogue for a while. The rest of the story is flipped back in time to her life from when she started at Mary's, forward. Chapters come back to the the state hospital here and there, but 80% of the rest of the story (or more) is the meat of the story.

    Thanks again

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