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  1. #21
    Author Pendragin
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    Re: Dialog to Narrative

    Alright, I guess 14 words won't hurt me then.



  2. #22
    Gary Kessler
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    Re: Dialog to Narrative

    No, it wouldn't. But it would also be just fine for your character to misquote in dialogue. Most people misquote in real life.

  3. #23
    Anthony Ravenscroft
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    Re: Dialog to Narrative

    Yah, tags aren't really important here. However, my readerly "eyes" glaze over without a little more updating on what's physically happening. I'd like to see more changes in body language, movement, gestures, & so on -- not glop, but some hints.

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