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Thread: Which sentence?

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    Beautiful Loser
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    Re: Which sentence?

    He flung the blinds open!



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    Beautiful Loser
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    Re: Which sentence?

    If you want to add some tension/suspense to your scene, add drama and excitement when your character says or does something your readers don't expect. You can also add in dialog to embellish the conflict.

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