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  1. #21
    Battle Angel
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    Re: Your Critique is needed!

    His face was quite changed and it was strange enough for a span of mere a year had run since they had last seen each other.

    It could read: Strangely enough, his face had changed quite a bit in the year since they had seen each other.

    Or: His face had changed quite a bit in the last year.

    Every sentence is like this. Way too much for us to correct.



  2. #22
    Janice W-D
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    Re: Your Critique is needed!

    Well said, Battle Angel. Some people don't understand the vast difference between critiquing and editing a piece. I charge $$ for the later.

    Best,
    Janice

  3. #23
    martin shaw
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    Re: Your Critique is needed!

    There are different sorts of editing of course!

  4. #24
    Rogue Mutt
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    Re: Your Critique is needed!

    I charge $$ for the later.

    How do your prices compare to Oberon's?

  5. #25
    Janice W-D
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    Re: Your Critique is needed!

    Mutt,

    A lot lower. I edit for content, not grammar.

    Best,
    Janice

  6. #26
    sam albion
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    Re: Your Critique is needed!


    Yes, it is obvious the writer is not a native english speaker... I agree..

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