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  1. #1
    Josh Brown
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    Help with a line

    A serial killer takes an clueless, bubbly, unsuspecting prostitute to a motel room. She asks how he wants her (meaning sexual position), he responds by saying he wants her "inside out."

    I'm having trouble finding the appropriate response to that line.

    If you were a clueless, bubbly, unsuspecting prostitute, what would your response be??



  2. #2
    Keith .
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    Re: Help with a line

    what would your response be??

    "Well, honey, that's gonna cost extra."





    And please change an clueless to a clueless. Luck.
    km

  3. #3
    Patrick Edwards
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    Re: Help with a line

    I like Keith's response. It's probably perfect. I see the gum-chewing and all as she's removing clothing.

    OR

    She could look at him, and then do that short laugh thing, which is followed by a longer laugh, but then as she looks into his deranged eyes, she begins to get nervous and tries to make up something to get her outta there. But, of course, that's not gonna happen, right?

  4. #4
    leslee
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    Re: Help with a line

    You could play her naive and eager to please.

    She could say, "Inside out? That's a new one. Show me."

  5. #5
    leslee
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    Re: Help with a line

    p.s. - I like Keith's answer better, but it's a bit jaded. If she's "clueless, bubbly, unsuspecting," she might not say something as dead-on as "That'll cost extra."

  6. #6
    Keith .
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    Re: Help with a line

    "Sheesh, that's the 3rd time this week .."
    "Why can't I just put it in for you?"
    "Got any Scope?"
    "Known in the biz as a 'beaver pelt'."
    "Should I use an enema first?"
    "Okay, where's the dog?"

    and finally:

    "Why can't preachers just fvck like everybody else?"

  7. #7
    Janice W-D
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    Re: Help with a line

    Response:

    You're not from around here, are you?

  8. #8
    Rogue Mutt
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    Re: Help with a line

    Wow, Keith really knows his hookers...

  9. #9
    Keith .
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    Re: Help with a line

    And they knew me, my friend. They knew me.







    Actually a pretty disgusting thought. It's always been easier to just switch hands when I wanted some strange.

  10. #10
    Kitty Foyle
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    Re: Help with a line

    Keith, do your kids know they have a weird daddy? :-)

    Maybe the bubbly babe could just giggle and say, "Oh wow...but then I would look awfully ugly, wouldn't I?"

    *_*

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