My dream is to be able to write and write and write and have enough money to pay others to correct and correct and correct. :P

Personal experience, write and finish it. Fix it after. Once it's finished, you seem to have a better lens on what needs attention. Otherwise, I've found corrections on an unfinished novel can be both tedious and unfocused.

That means it just burns a lot of time and effort, "The car was damaged?" Or "The car was dented?"

Pfft.

Finish should be the goal.