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  1. #21
    S Stull
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    Re: Comments and criticisms welcome...

    To make it more "personal," different reactions for the people? The natives ARE indeed used to Dragons (since many are "Riders"), but I expect readers will want... er... blood? Give it to them how, though, that is the question. Heh.

    Thanks.



  2. #22
    the cat came back
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    Re: Comments and criticisms welcome...

    Make someone want something and try to get it against opposition -- right away.

    "Blood" is a metaphor.

  3. #23
    S Stull
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    Re: Comments and criticisms welcome...

    Thanks, I'll hop to.

  4. #24
    the cat came back
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    Re: Comments and criticisms welcome...

    Nice verb: action. :-)

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