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  1. #11
    Rachael Elg
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    Re: Is this a weak scene?

    I always put the marshmellow in and wonder how long I can put it in for. The goal is to get it to grow as big as possible without exploding inside the mircrowave.

    I just realized, that as I was reading, I had substituted fire for microwave...odd...

    Rachael



  2. #12
    Jenn B.
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    Re: Is this a weak scene?

    S Glen:
    It was Liv Tyler in armageddon laying down and ben aflek playing with her stomach with animal crackers...just so you know....
    AJ:
    I Like this scene because it's playful, but agree that it needs some revision in the grammar department...other than that, i enjoyed it!

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