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Thread: "The Big Easy"

  1. #21
    James Armstrong II
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    Re: "The Big Easy"

    "This is just bad writing. Plain and simple."

    Would you care to elaborate? I can use all the help I can get.

    -Aladdin Sarsippius Suleminagic Jackson III



  2. #22
    Pat Mac
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    Re: "The Big Easy"

    If you must be told why, you'll never get it. Go read some of the American canon of literature and try again.

  3. #23
    James Armstrong II
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    Re: "The Big Easy"

    Don't hand me that condescending horsesh!t! Explain your criticisms.

    There has been people that posted published works in here to see the response that some of you give them and it is usually the same as yours.

    I don't have any problem with the criticisms, just those that drop grenades in the room and leave. ELABORATE.

    -Aladdin Sarsippius Suleminagic Jackson III

  4. #24
    Pat Mac
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    Re: "The Big Easy"

    1. Neither the characters nor the story is interesting
    2. The language is limp and uninspiring
    3. The format renders the narration nearly impossible to follow
    4. The prose is full of cliches
    5. The characters are not interesting. There is nothing about them to make me want to learn more about them.
    6. No causality is expressed anywhere; there is no apparent plot.
    7. The title is already taken.

    If you want writing lessons, give me your credit card number and I'll charge you $500.00 for five 0ne-hour lessions via web-tv.

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