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  1. #21
    Anne
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    Re: We're not *that* dumb!

    Ryan-

    My daughter (whose 12 and in advanced Language Arts classes in school) just read your original post and here are her comments:

    "I had to read it twice to get what he was saying. I think the sentences are too long. If I'm not reading it for school, I don't want to read it twice."

    She's a real ray of sunshine. Take it for what's it's worth.

    Anne



  2. #22
    Ryan Bruner
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    Re: We're not *that* dumb!

    Anne:

    Thanks for getting your daughter's feedback. It will be helpful when it comes time for editing.

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