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Thread: Good Opening?

  1. #51


    It's never a good idea to ignore the bluebird of happiness, even if she's red.

    BRILLIANT. I love this. Reminds me of that Devo song...
    "Mongoloid, he was a mongoloid, Happier than you and me."

  2. #52
    Sarah H.

    Re: rewrite

    Rich, your story keeps getting better and better.

    &nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbspYou want to make indentations?Try typing[&nbsp] in front of what you want indented. Each[&nbsp]= one space. Good luck.

  3. #53
    John R.

    Re: Tee Hee :)

    Great! Then you knew it all along. This is what I excel at dispensing here: the bloody obvious.

    No, really, sounds like you've got the right idea. Carry on. I'll just go back to picking on people at random.

  4. #54
    Sarah H.

    Re: rewrite

    It did not show up. Put these together without spaces in between & n b s p and they will create one space in front of your text.

  5. #55

    Re: rewrite

    Wow! I really enjoyed the second installment. Thanks for sharing. You have a very easy, natural writing style that definitely holds my interest.

    (BTW, regarding the first opening sentence. IMHO I don't think you can watch out the window AT someone).

  6. #56
    patti new-writer

    Re: rewrite

    Fatty Nattie?

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