Author: Michael Scott (---.bb.sky.com)
Date: 05-16-08 10:03
Thanks for taking the time, and I can see that it does need work. Ironically, I was critised for having to much dialogue, hence this part was narrative.
This passage is almost a flashback. Kayvee (Daniella) is probably the warmest character in the novel. The stranger (five years on) is her lover. Kayvee = KV = KidnapVictim.
Daniella will bake you cookies and she will cry if your puppy dies. If you press the right buttons. Rape or trying to take sexual advantage of a minor or somebody under the influence. Will probably do it. Almost like the hulk, KV comes back, hence during the novel she tries to cut somebody's tongue out, cuts somebody's throat and allows hersself to be raped, just so that another woman does not become a victim.
The piece you have read is supposed justify her actions and give the character creditbility.
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