Author: Michael Scott (---.bb.sky.com)
Date: 05-16-08 02:18
Ooops! I'm getting the feeling nobody really like that excerpt. I can't really scrap it, it's too far embedded. I've improved the punctuation and changed the last paragraph. I guess, I'll have to look at it again. I am probably the engineer of my own undoing. I am desperately trying to write in cubes rather than spheres.
I can't just say she was a drug addicted hooker, She's a Soccer Mom now.
Stop right there, read the sentence above. God! We speak different languages don't we. 'A drug addicted hooker' is a Rugby player that uses steriods. The game is called Football, not soccer and you most certainly don't spell mum. M O M.
Right now I am so feeling her drug use!
Again, thanks for taking the time.
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