Author: dream catcher
Date:   11-05-09 19:50

Okay, this is my third attempt. I want to thank everyone who had responded to my other two posts. Hopefully, I'm getting closer. Let me know if this one is any better, or if I'm getting worse. All feedack is appreciated. Thank you.

Dear Agent,

A simple touch… a warm embrace, that’s all Elsie Montoyage desires from her newfound love, but his appearance, and the secret he holds, may deem that impossible.

The first time seventeen-year-old Elsie encounters him, she is moments away from ending her life. A brief glimpse in the mirror sends her bottle of pills crashing to the floor, then he’s gone. The next day he materializes next to her, and she finds out that Aiden Prescott has no intentions to leave.

She isn’t sure why she is the only one who can see him, and she has no idea that his comatose body lay in the hospital. A result of the same accident that claimed the life of her foster sister, only months ago. Losing her mother the day she was born, and her father’s brutal attack in her past, contributes to her untrusting present. But Aiden’s willingness to fulfill her dead sisters promise, combined with his compassion, breaks down Elsie’s emotional barrier. And soon she realizes that she is falling deeply and irresistibly in love with him, and together they both start to crave the one thing they can’t have, a simple embrace. But if she discovers his car was the final impact that killed her sister, he could lose the one thing that keeps him alive, Elsie.

One fatal night will bind these two together, but if neither of them can accept that the accident wasn’t their fault, it has the potential to rip them apart.

THEN THERE WAS YOU is a 82,000-word YA Paranormal romance, which takes readers away from the mythical vampires and werewolves, and leans them towards the possibilities and magic with what our spiritual bodies are capable of.

I am certified in Reiki Level One, and I have applied my training and research on energy fields, vibrations, and all other aspects of the spiritual planes into this manuscript.

If you are interested in the full manuscript, it is available at your request. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,