If this is a paranormal romance, is there an HEA that allows Aiden and Elsie to wind up together? The query gives the impression that it ends like the movie "Ghost" with the hero disappearing/crossing over at the end. That's unacceptable for a romance. If so, it'll need to be shelved as regular YA, rather than YA romance. Either is fine, but the query needs to be clear.
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