Author: dream catcher
Date:   11-03-09 09:52

Jason and Cindy,
Thank you for your replies.
And Cindy, thank you so much for taking the time to show me what needs to be worked on. I'm not sure if I was writing this wrong, because I really wanted to focus on the romance bit. But there is one more person in the story, and I didn't want to confuse an agent by bringing her in. She is the daughter of the guy who caused the accident, he was D.U.I. And she has every intention to get even with Elsie. Even though she didn't cause the accident, the girl still blames her because if she wasn't on the road that night her father may have made it home. Let me know if I'm confusing you guys, because I was afraid I would do that to an agent, that's why I left her out.

Okay, I will see what I can do with this letter, and post in again when I figure it out. Thanks again.