Author: Cindy Kay
Date:   11-02-09 15:35

Hugh,

Not my kind of book so I can't be of much help. But that first graph baffled me and I don't know why you'd go such a long way around just to make the Hoosier connection. It did not work to interest me and seemed unnecessarily convoluted.

I became most interested when you said the team was the topped ranked in the country and came from lowly origins.

But like I said, I'm not your audience.