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Critique my query letter please

Author: Dennis Boyle (---.dsl.chcgil.sbcglobal.net)
Date:   07-29-08 12:19

Please help me refine my query letter.

Greetings,
I have written a novel called Equality 911. The story is set 100 years in the future after an epidemic that has killed most of humanity. The survivors form a small city that is controlled by a socialist government. One man is a private business owner who struggles against draconian taxes and regulation. He is abused, whipped, and imprisoned. His lover is also tortured and humiliated. He escapes and ultimately returns to save his lover, and to wreak havoc on the town that tortured and abused him.

The novel combines political philosophy with action-adventure, along with post-apocalyptic science fiction and ancient history. The story has a gripping plot, a strong moral, and a satisfying ending. The characters are attractive and heroic. The plot is easy to follow with one big surprise. The imagery is sweeping and panoramic.

The work is pro-capitalism, pro-freedom, and pro-individualism. It will be satisfying to readers who are disturbed by creeping socialism.

I am a 49 year old married father of two. I work as a computer specialist and I live near Chicago. My background is engineering and computers. I am an avid reader with wide ranging interests. This is my first novel and it will need professional editing.

I\'d be happy to send you a complete copy of the manuscript for your review. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Dennis Boyle
dennisboyle99@gmail.com

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Dave S 07-29-08 15:20 
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Wonky 07-30-08 03:11 
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