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My Query Letter For Your Critque

Author: Jay Elwood Seymour (---.neo.res.rr.com)
Date:   07-25-08 12:42

Okay, I here it is. Gimme your opinions.

It's been sent to 30 agents as of today.
- (4) no's
- (1) i'm pregnant and take any submissions


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Jay Elwood Seymour
(address)
(phone number)
jayelwoodseymour@gmail.com

Dear ____ _____,

What would you do with divine power literally at your fingertips?

Elijah Egan's world is torn apart when his twin brother Emerson is killed late at night on the dark streets of Coventry. Seeking meaning and purpose to the world, he meets a man named Dr. Malum who offers to reveal the most ancient and guarded secrets of the universe. But Dr. Malum is not just any man; he's an Angel.

The Angelic Dr. Malum gives Elijah the opportunity to join an ancient secret society known as The Angelic Heritage, where he will learn to achieve and control divine ability along side his best friend Christian and seven other chosen teenagers. He will train with ArchAngels who protect the innocent, meet Demons who roam the underground, and find the clues that will lead him to his brother's killer as well as discover the dark and mysterious truth behind that Angels’ longest kept secrets. Who will prevail in a war between the Angels of faith and the Angels or reason?

THE FOUR CROWN PRINCES is complete at around 90,000 words. It is the first book of THE ANGELIC HERITAGE trilogy. It is a fantasy novel with a mystery twist meant for ages fourteen and up. Although religion is addressed in this tale of Angels, this is not a Christian or religious novel, but is a story meant for people of all walks of life.
Thank you for your consideration and time. A complete manuscript of The Angelic Heritage: The Four Crown Princes is available upon request.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind Regards,
Jay Elwood Seymour

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