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Just a little something
dying .....
suffocating in irrelevance
wasting in disconnect
losing against control
mind shrinking
no thoughts worth considering
heart souring
no love worth fighting
smiling through
novocaine existence
withering to nothing
significant to him
Amy!!!... this is so... sad!
Aww Jayce!! Didn't mean to make you sad! :o
I'll post another that will brighten things up a bit! I'm really not that sad, have been before, but not today! LOL
This read more like a suicide note than a simple dying epilogue. Was that your intent?
OH NO! Cindy lol, it's not a suicide note nor really a dying epilogue. Well the dying of ones spirit (mind, soul, heart), not body. A past, controlling relationship can cause you to feel this way. Too heavy, huh? LOL
No, no - I can see both. My mind was set on the physical while reading, though, and I kept thinking of this poor woman who is getting ready to end it all because her man is a schmuk. Sinking into a severe depression, however, is also obvious. It covers it all!
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The "significant" to him really made it sting. Told me exactly what is going on here. I so saw it as a relationship gone bad, and in the end it was because of either a controlling person or clingy. But because usually clingy people don't make you depressed so, yes, I thought controlling. So sad.
Hi Miranda, glad you got the vibe here and that it made you sad, I guess it did it's job :o Thanks for reading girl!
Cindy~ thanks again for reading and for looking at it from the perspective I offered.