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  1. Revision for Query after the last critique for THE FIANL CLUE

    Thanks again for the last critique. I'm posting one more before I break away from it again. I appreciate any help I can get in order for me to get...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 08-23-2011 01:05 PM
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    09-05-2011, 08:20 AM Go to last post
  2. Roxane query, 2nd go

    Thank you SO MUCH, everyone, for the tremendous help I got here! This clocks in under a page, so I'd love to know if you feel it's improved. Thanks!...

    Started by SapphireBlue‎, 08-15-2011 11:17 AM
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    09-05-2011, 08:03 AM Go to last post
  3. Query Letter - 3rd Draft

    Dear Agent, The moon looms overhead as Jake Steen shoves another silver bolt into his crossbow and carefully watches the werewolf shrink and...

    Started by Chris W‎, 09-03-2011 09:17 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    09-05-2011, 07:40 AM Go to last post
  4. STRINGS OF HEART-revision! thanks for everyone who helped!

    I really appreciate all the help and critique I got. thanks to y'all! :) here's the 2nd go of the Q. still, all comments are welcomed. Dear...

    Started by Vanessa Gao‎, 08-29-2011 06:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    09-05-2011, 07:29 AM Go to last post
  5. testing

    Just testing this out. I tried posting twice on here but no thread seems to be turning up.

    Started by J D‎, 09-05-2011 03:18 AM
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    09-05-2011, 03:18 AM Go to last post
  6. Query Revision

    Thanks for all the guidance on the last attempt. I've revised my query completely with more meat, less potatoes and no pie :D Thanks again for...

    Started by Chris W‎, 09-01-2011 03:46 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    09-05-2011, 03:08 AM Go to last post
  7. can someone take a look at this query please

    I have posted my query to other forums and I am trying to get as much feedback as I possibly can. I know it needs work so please if you will take a...

    Started by Elisa Pullins‎, 09-04-2011 02:04 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    09-04-2011, 02:04 PM Go to last post
  8. Query: POPULATION DECLINED

    Hello, I recently submitted my query to agents and the response was not good. I postedc my query letter to another forum and I got some great...

    Started by Elisa Pullins‎, 09-03-2011 06:39 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    09-03-2011, 06:39 PM Go to last post
  9. Query Letter Help--Just Starting

    Here's my attempt at writing a catchy hook and summing up the plot/story. Any help will be more than welcomed! Thanks in advance. Dear Agent, ...

    Started by Danielle Stubblefield‎, 09-03-2011 10:11 AM
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    09-03-2011, 10:11 AM Go to last post
  10. Query Help - First Time Post

    I hate to do this as a first post, but I have been banging my head against the wall (literally, I see dents) trying to get my query letter just...

    Started by Chris W‎, 08-28-2011 09:03 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 1,097
    09-01-2011, 03:10 PM Go to last post
  11. Query Help.

    Please let me know what you think.. I am requesting permission to submit my fiction manuscript for your evaluation. The working title is, More...

    Started by Maribel Suggs‎, 08-29-2011 05:17 PM
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    08-30-2011, 04:36 PM Go to last post
  12. PLEASE HELP!! Query: STRINGS OF HEART

    hi guys, i'm new to the forums but i do wish to seek help for my writing career here. please tell me if there is anything i can do to better the...

    Started by Vanessa Gao‎, 08-23-2011 07:26 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 1,463
    08-28-2011, 07:46 PM Go to last post
  13. Revision for a Query: THE FINAL CLUE.

    Hello everyone, I haven't submitted anything for a while. I've been doing my homework on cleaning up my ms. If you don't mind I could really use a...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 08-18-2011 11:16 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    08-23-2011, 01:01 PM Go to last post
  14. Query letter obsession, 4th draft

    4th draft. hope it's getting better... thoughts needed. Dear Agent, Every night Colin Wyle lives vicariously through another person in his...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-18-2011 04:51 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    08-19-2011, 01:45 PM Go to last post
  15. Query Letter Critique, 2nd draft

    Thanks guys for all your help. here' s a 2nd go around, hopefully this one is better than the first!. For the past three years, money, expensive...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-14-2011 02:28 AM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 792
    08-18-2011, 08:31 AM Go to last post
  16. A question about genre

    I've been querying agents for a while and am beginning to wonder if I am correctly categorizing the genre of my work. Can anyone provide what an...

    Started by Kenneth Teicher‎, 08-15-2011 11:50 AM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 1,387
    08-17-2011, 02:03 PM Go to last post
  17. ROXANE query letter

    Roxane, a Persian princess, risked everything to wed Alexander the Great. Their passion was the stuff of legend: she marched into battle at her...

    Started by SapphireBlue‎, 08-08-2011 08:11 AM
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    08-15-2011, 12:25 PM Go to last post
  18. Another attempt - Betrayal Query

    Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. I am new at this and am learning how difficult the process really is. Thanks to all of you who have...

    Started by Michele Bass‎, 08-09-2011 09:01 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 1,426
    08-14-2011, 12:59 AM Go to last post
  19. help me with query letter?

    help is appreciated! (redid it from before) Dear Agent: When the mind is too open, it gets an infection. The Mad Monks is a character study of...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-10-2011 11:45 AM
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    08-12-2011, 01:49 PM Go to last post
  20. critique my query letter?

    Hi all -- help is much appreciated. ~ = redacted Dear *agent*: My name is ~. I'm writing to query my completed 70,000 word novel...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-09-2011 01:16 PM
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    • Replies: 47
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    08-10-2011, 06:03 PM Go to last post

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