HomeWritersLiterary AgentsEditorsPublishersResourcesDiscussion
Forum Login | Join the discussion
+ Post New Thread
Page 8 of 18 FirstFirst ... 6 7 8 9 10 ... LastLast
Threads 141 to 160 of 353

Forum: Query Letters

Only registered members may read or post to this forum. Post your private query here, for help or critiques from other members.

  1. Query for Hellish

    How does my query sound? Please give me the good and the bad. Dear , Ask anyone about 16 year-old Krista Beakly and they will tell you that...

    Started by Dustin Wright‎, 10-28-2011 08:54 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,284
    10-28-2011, 09:55 PM Go to last post
  2. Revision--for YA query

    Thanks for all the help so far! You've been great. Here's my revision--hopefully I'm whittling this down into something that doesn't, you know,...

    Started by Carrie Graves‎, 10-15-2011 09:35 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 2,007
    10-28-2011, 08:48 PM Go to last post
  3. Unhappy Please give opinion on query letter

    Yeah, it's probably worse than last time. Vague. Uninteresting. Blah. I've reached a lethargic state where I all I want is to ditch this and work on...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 10-14-2011 09:53 PM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 3,593
    10-15-2011, 02:40 PM Go to last post
  4. Wink i need an opinion on my Query Letter. Plz Help:)

    Query Letter for My YA Novel Beautiful Disaster Dear Mr. Agent Someone's fallen for her. Someone else wants her dead. For Chloe Van Cleef, falling...

    Started by Devon Thomas‎, 10-15-2011 08:24 AM
    agent, paranormal, query, young adult
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,160
    10-15-2011, 02:12 PM Go to last post
  5. Query: POPULATION DECLINED

    This has been revised already. I posted to another forum and it was critiqued and i reposted and seemed to get good feedback. I would like to hear...

    Started by Elisa Pullins‎, 09-03-2011 06:51 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,555
    10-14-2011, 10:39 PM Go to last post
  6. Red face query letter problem

    Hi all. I'm just getting ready to send off my query letter. This particular agency requests a QL, first 5 pages of the novel, and a synopsis...in...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-10-2011 10:29 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 16
    • Views: 2,205
    10-13-2011, 01:02 AM Go to last post
  7. Query letter biography

    Hi Guys. I have a quick question. I'm considering writing the biography part of my query in third person, like you'd find on a book jacket... you...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-04-2011 07:14 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
    • Views: 2,232
    10-05-2011, 06:06 PM Go to last post
  8. This query has worked a couple times, but...

    I'd like to know where I could "beef it up." It seems I have the hardest time writing cover letters and the synopsis of my novel. I think I get too...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-27-2011 05:17 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 3,069
    10-04-2011, 03:35 PM Go to last post
  9. Query Critique - Literary Fiction

    Hello All, I would love some feedback on my query letter. I've been testing the waters with some agents but have a nagging feeling that I need...

    Started by L A‎, 09-21-2011 09:58 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 15
    • Views: 2,792
    09-28-2011, 07:22 PM Go to last post
  10. Query- Attempt # 7

    My wife tells me that the number of grey hairs on my head has tripled since I started the query letter writing process. Oh well, here goes nothing......

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-20-2011 09:42 AM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 53
    • Views: 9,584
    09-21-2011, 01:57 PM Go to last post
  11. Querry, 6th attempt

    Dear Agent, I would sit Indian style by the curb outside as my parents screamed at each other in the house, but after the divorce, I became the...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-17-2011 07:00 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,147
    09-20-2011, 09:27 AM Go to last post
  12. Advise for 1st query letter

    This is my very 1st query letter written for my first novel, THE SECERT TO A GOOD MAN. I'm really unsure of what lit. agents are looking for in...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 09-16-2011 11:25 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 29
    • Views: 6,559
    09-18-2011, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  13. Post Query help needed! All feedback welcome! Unicorn Wars

    Hi, I am so new to this. I tried to follow some guidelines I read. Any feedback is readily welcome! The title of my story is the...

    Started by Amee Hagler‎, 09-15-2011 06:57 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 3,755
    09-18-2011, 12:30 AM Go to last post
  14. Query#5, Sharonworld

    Dear Agent, Joshua is used to his parents’ violent arguments, but after they divorce, he becomes the focus of his mother’s wrath. When she starts...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-16-2011 11:46 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
    • Views: 1,774
    09-16-2011, 06:37 PM Go to last post
  15. Query Help. Please

    Hey, I'm new to this forum but I would really appreciate any advice on this query, or ways to improve it. Please let me know what you think... Thank...

    Started by Laura-Ashley Fitzgerald‎, 08-30-2011 08:43 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 1,824
    09-16-2011, 08:30 AM Go to last post
  16. Attempt # 4 "SHARON WORLD"

    This is totally revamped and I really hope its better!!! Dear Agent, “We had to get out an atlas to find out where Nova Scotia was but it...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-15-2011 01:53 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
    • Views: 2,744
    09-15-2011, 05:10 PM Go to last post
  17. Round Three-Query for "Sharon World"

    I feel like its getting closer. This has been so much more frustrating then writing the book! Dear Agent, When home becomes a battlefield, with...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-14-2011 11:13 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
    • Views: 2,119
    09-14-2011, 04:17 PM Go to last post
  18. Query opinions

    I know this one could use some improvement, but I'm looking for some opinions here. Anything anyone has is appreciated... Thanks in advance.. ...

    Started by J D‎, 09-13-2011 09:47 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
    • Views: 2,196
    09-14-2011, 09:52 AM Go to last post
  19. 2nd Atempt. A revision of Query letter for "Sharon World"

    After getting a lot of good constructive criticism about my first attempt at a query for my book, this is a completely new version. I really...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-12-2011 11:51 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 2,928
    09-13-2011, 08:15 AM Go to last post
  20. Query Letter Feedback

    Query Letter Feedback Hello forum members. I just joined and am so excited to discover this site. I just finished my first book and wrote a...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-10-2011 05:58 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
    • Views: 1,663
    09-10-2011, 08:30 AM Go to last post

Thread Display Options

Use this control to limit the display of threads to those newer than the specified time frame.

Allows you to choose the data by which the thread list will be sorted.

Order threads in...

Note: when sorting by date, 'descending order' will show the newest results first.

Icon Legend

Contains unread posts
Contains unread posts
Contains no unread posts
Contains no unread posts
More than 15 replies or 150 views
Hot thread with unread posts
More than 15 replies or 150 views
Hot thread with no unread posts
Closed Thread
Thread is closed
Thread Contains a Message Written By You
You have posted in this thread

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts