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  1. Critics welcome

    Sorry about the asterisks. The IPad seems to force them in. Republican Aftermath Daniel Prescott hates the Republican Party. As a retired...

    Started by Liberal‎, 07-14-2012 11:35 AM
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  2. Query Help

    I seem to be stuck in query purgatory and I was wondering if this was getting close. I am still working on the final paragraph. I've tried to show...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-03-2011 09:32 AM
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  3. Query attempt two

    Okay, Thanks everyone for their suggestions. I've incorporated most of it. This will probably be my final query post. I still think it's risky,...

    Started by The Tainted‎, 01-21-2011 07:00 AM
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    01-22-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  4. QL Re-try Any better?

    Well it's 6.30am here and the sun is just coming out. I woke up to work on the at 4.30am so I'm giving it another go. Having taken time away from...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-02-2011 11:36 AM
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  5. ROXANE query letter

    Roxane, a Persian princess, risked everything to wed Alexander the Great. Their passion was the stuff of legend: she marched into battle at her...

    Started by SapphireBlue‎, 08-08-2011 07:11 AM
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    08-15-2011, 11:25 AM Go to last post
  6. RIGHT! Totally different approach - 4get the mini synopsis!

    I have been looking at the idea of NOT telling the story as I cannot see how I can sum up my 'story' in 300 words. Instead, I have taken a really...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-13-2011 01:24 AM
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    02-24-2011, 12:33 PM Go to last post
  7. Re: Addiction memoir query

    My transformation from an award-winning CNN producer to a clumsily contained pain pill addict was a solitary experience, but finding my sobriety...

    Started by r k‎, 10-13-2015 01:59 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-25-2016, 10:27 AM Go to last post
  8. Query Letter Critique, Please - YA Novel

    Hi, Everyone! I'm new to the forums, but I've really enjoyed them so far. It's obvious there is a lot of valuable feedback available. So, thanks...

    Started by Shannon Hubbard‎, 01-16-2011 10:02 AM
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    01-30-2011, 07:34 AM Go to last post
  9. Is this ready to send off?

    In 2010, I was a Peabody and DuPont award-winning producer at CNN who was addicted to painkillers. And while it was a solitary existence, my...

    Started by r k‎, 11-08-2015 07:16 AM
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    02-10-2016, 04:29 AM Go to last post
  10. A non-fiction query, second take

    I've removed the sentence about the book being edited by a native speaker and I've made other changes. I worry, though, that an agent will judge the...

    Started by cabbage‎, 01-29-2013 08:12 AM
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    02-06-2013, 04:34 AM Go to last post
  11. Query Letter: Leap Forward

    Hey! This is the second query letter that I mentioned earlier. In this query I try out the name Leap Forward instead of Keep Faith. It's the...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-10-2014 09:08 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    12-20-2014, 03:30 PM Go to last post
  12. Query Critique - Paranormal Romance

    I would love some feedback on my query letter. Thank you so much for your help. Now I'm off to critique someone else. Amy Dear Agent, ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-19-2011 08:49 PM
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    01-21-2011, 08:48 AM Go to last post
  13. Query help needed!

    Hi all, I'm Carrie--a newbie. I don't know why I didn't see this forum before. I think my brain is fried from staring at this query letter for...

    Started by Carrie Graves‎, 10-14-2011 09:49 AM
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    05-28-2016, 09:09 AM Go to last post
  14. New QL Attempt

    Its almost 1am here in Australia and I've been working on a new version of my QL for the past 10 hours or so. I've tried to take into account what...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 01-14-2011 05:49 AM
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    01-14-2011, 08:37 PM Go to last post
  15. I have a request for a partial!!! Arghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! (and a question :))

    Ok, ok, I admit, I wanted to share this :D (does it show I'm a little excited? lol) But I really wanted to ask something, and to thank you all...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 05-11-2011 10:21 PM
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    06-10-2011, 08:43 PM Go to last post
  16. Query Attempt #1000

    I've taken everyone's advice and tried to show who Chloe is, her conflict and what she must do. Is this on the right track or am I still going the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-15-2011 07:21 AM
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    02-18-2011, 11:42 AM Go to last post
  17. Query Letter for fiction

    It seems a little long. I'm not sure if I should cut the professor. He's one of three main characters whose stories intertwine. The entire query,...

    Started by Reade‎, 03-12-2012 03:13 PM
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    03-18-2012, 11:38 AM Go to last post
  18. Query letter, help please!

    Hi guys :) I am writing the query letter and I am posting it here so that I am sure, it has the best of what I could come up with. So it is a...

    Started by Aizza‎, 10-30-2015 09:03 PM
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    11-03-2015, 01:18 PM Go to last post
  19. Escaping the Water's Edge - Take Two

    I've revisited my query letter with some of the suggestions I received after posting my first. Here is my second draft. All critique is welcome. ...

    Started by Cheryl Morton‎, 06-06-2011 07:04 AM
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    06-20-2011, 06:37 AM Go to last post
  20. Query letter for PRINCE OF SLAVES

    I have been through multiple revisions with this query, but there's always room for another round (and another, and another) I'm posting two...

    Started by Cez‎, 08-30-2016 01:54 PM
    fantasy, medieval, ya fiction
    • Replies: 4
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    08-31-2016, 02:02 PM Go to last post

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