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  1. Query Letter: The Apprentice's Journey

    Hello everyone! I'm trying to publish my first novel, and naturally the first step is to get my query up to scratch :) I've posted this and...

    Started by Raxis‎, 02-11-2015 08:39 PM
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    03-04-2015, 08:56 AM Go to last post
  2. Ouery Attempt #2

    After the first attempt led to a thorough editing of the whole MS (all the advice and the critique, I've received, has turned out to be just...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 03-29-2011 01:01 PM
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    03-31-2011, 12:22 PM Go to last post
  3. OK I'm trying again

    It's 3.30am here in Australia and I couldn't sleep, having had another 'moment' so I've been working on this V of my QL from a totally different...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 03-09-2011 08:41 AM
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    03-11-2011, 08:03 AM Go to last post
  4. Query Help

    I seem to be stuck in query purgatory and I was wondering if this was getting close. I am still working on the final paragraph. I've tried to show...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-03-2011 09:32 AM
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    02-06-2011, 06:12 AM Go to last post
  5. Talking Query letter (third try lol). Please critique.

    Thanks in advance to anyone who responds. Okay, obviously I've left out the Dear Agent etc. The REAL QL is in the next post..still can't figure...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 05-10-2011 11:37 PM
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    05-19-2011, 12:54 AM Go to last post
  6. help me with query letter?

    help is appreciated! (redid it from before) Dear Agent: When the mind is too open, it gets an infection. The Mad Monks is a character study of...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-10-2011 11:45 AM
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    08-12-2011, 01:49 PM Go to last post
  7. Feedback needed

    WORD WAR I: The Truth Behind The Words We Use In Our Daily Lives Revealed WORD WAR I begins with a poignant reflection on the hardest and...

    Started by Michael Victor Jackson‎, 05-20-2016 06:54 AM
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    communication, hope, query letter help, words, wwi
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    06-17-2016, 02:12 PM Go to last post
  8. Exercise: Queries for famous books

    Itís been awfully serious around here, with a lot of people really grinding away at their query letters and receiving incisive (and sometimes hard)...

    Started by John Hawkwood‎, 02-03-2011 09:08 AM
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    03-20-2011, 02:29 PM Go to last post
  9. Edited Query for Non-Fiction

    If I may bother you one more time? Those of you who are not already sick and tired of this, and I could not blame you.... But I tried to...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-01-2011 04:54 AM
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  10. REVISED: Query Critique - Awakening

    Deleted at poster's request.

    Started by Tanya Thibodeau‎, 08-02-2011 01:34 AM
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    08-06-2011, 03:56 PM Go to last post
  11. Query -- SUBSERVIA

    Hello All, Thanks in advance. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Must. Get. This. Right. :)-D SUBSERVIA is a 90,000-word...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-05-2011 10:51 PM
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    04-19-2011, 04:26 PM Go to last post
  12. QL Attempt #3 :S

    Please, have mercy is it still overwritten? I went around Leslee's one-liner, trying not to spoil it. Am I getting closer?:S "Toward the...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-04-2011 05:18 AM
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    04-06-2011, 10:58 AM Go to last post
  13. Help with my query letter

    I have completed my creative nonfiction manuscript and would appreciate any help with my query letter: Creative nonfiction: 31,680 words Dear...

    Started by Kay Jones‎, 03-21-2011 01:56 PM
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    03-27-2011, 04:52 PM Go to last post
  14. Question Talking of customised query letters...

    I've encountered one, interestingly sounding agent, who doesn't want neither QL nor synopsis. To quote some of her submission guidelines: "For...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 05-25-2011 10:49 AM
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    05-31-2011, 10:39 PM Go to last post
  15. Please Critique My Query

    Fellow Writers, Below is the latest draft of my query letter. I appreciate any honest feedback or means of improvement, before I send out my next...

    Started by P.T. DUNN‎, 08-16-2016 02:19 AM
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    lolgreenstein
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    08-27-2016, 07:47 AM Go to last post
  16. Here's your chance for retribution

    Just a forewarning, this story does have a little bit of a kink factor to it. Lord knows, I've done my share of dismembering and flaying alive of...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 03-24-2011 06:21 PM
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    03-25-2011, 08:18 PM Go to last post
  17. Reply to my latest QL - thanks guys :)

    Just wanted to let everyone know (all of you who have helped) that of the 6 QLís (latest version) I sent out in the past 48 hours, I have already had...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 03-19-2011 05:09 PM
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    03-21-2011, 11:24 AM Go to last post
  18. Desert Rain- Please critique

    Thank you, everyone who have helped me so far, your advice has been great! This is my latest attempt, could you please critique it for me? I would...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 04-30-2011 10:56 AM
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    05-09-2011, 08:21 AM Go to last post
  19. New to the writing world and would appreciate any feedback regarding my query.

    Most people take freedom for granted but Ashlyn Shea doesn't have that luxury. Whomever can possess the rare half-vampire/half-witch will become...

    Started by Michele Bass‎, 06-23-2011 05:46 AM
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    07-11-2011, 02:45 PM Go to last post
  20. YA Novel Query

    I am almost ready to begin querying agents for my YA novel. How does my query sound? Les Fairbanks attends an upscale private school in South...

    Started by Dustin Wright‎, 07-11-2011 08:59 PM
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    07-27-2011, 03:08 AM Go to last post

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