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  1. How to wirte a query when there are 2 MC?

    In my thriller I have two main characters. The first chapter has two scenes. My story opens with character A on a plane that is attacked by...

    Started by Kenneth Teicher‎, 02-19-2011 07:16 AM
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    02-19-2011, 03:41 PM Go to last post
  2. Synopsis PLEASE critique

    Looking for opinions on my following query letter, can anyone shoot me some advice? Attention: Joe Blow Thanks in advance for the consideration...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-19-2011 01:48 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-20-2011, 11:10 PM Go to last post
  3. For your disection, toasting and roasting. Q + S

    Q Words 197 Dear Agent Mr/Mrs/Otherwise, Within hours of returning from a mission, Wulfgang von Wulf and his Special Operations team are...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 02-13-2011 07:51 PM
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    02-21-2011, 11:53 PM Go to last post
  4. Newbie - would love help with my query

    Dear AGENT, I hope you will be interested in my novel, ANOTHER LONELY DAY. Itís one thing when the man you think youíre in love with cleanly...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 02-21-2011 01:54 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    02-22-2011, 01:42 PM Go to last post
  5. Query Letter Help, please? :)

    Hello! I'm new to this site, and I'm trying to write a query letter for my manuscript. I would greatly appreciate it if any of you would like to help...

    Started by Natasha Rodriguez‎, 02-06-2011 08:59 AM
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    02-22-2011, 02:20 PM Go to last post
  6. QUERY - Another Angle

    I'm trying, I swear to gosh I'm really trying. I've walked away from it, played with the kids, gone to the park, taken walks. I've left it alone. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-21-2011 12:49 PM
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    • Replies: 30
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    02-23-2011, 08:29 AM Go to last post
  7. In the Shadows Query--2nd attempt

    Hello everyone. I have revised and here it is. Let me know what you think. IN THE SHADOWS: When Patience Kell enters the Underrealm in search...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-23-2011 01:39 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    02-23-2011, 03:19 PM Go to last post
  8. RIGHT! Totally different approach - 4get the mini synopsis!

    I have been looking at the idea of NOT telling the story as I cannot see how I can sum up my 'story' in 300 words. Instead, I have taken a really...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-13-2011 01:24 AM
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    02-24-2011, 12:33 PM Go to last post
  9. Another Lonely Day - 2nd Attempt

    First, thanks to everyone who commented on my first attempt - much appreciated. Here's my 2nd try. Hopefully it's better! Dear ???, Anne...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 02-23-2011 10:21 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-24-2011, 12:54 PM Go to last post
  10. In the Shadows Query--3rd attempt

    My thanks to all those who have helped me so far. Here is the third revision. Please let me know your thoughts. IN THE SHADOWS: Patience Kell...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-24-2011 07:48 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-25-2011, 09:38 AM Go to last post
  11. Another Other Angle - QUERY:)

    Hi Friends, it's me again with hopefully a different query from the yawn fest ones I've previously posted. I tried to jump in with Phoenix and what...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-24-2011 05:59 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    02-25-2011, 10:35 AM Go to last post
  12. In the Shadows Query--4th attempt

    Hello. I hope this is better, and if you've read my previous attempts, please let me know if I am on the right track. Thanks for all your help so...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-25-2011 09:35 AM
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    • Replies: 11
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    02-25-2011, 02:06 PM Go to last post
  13. Moses synopsis advice attempt #2

    Here is my long synopsis, I am looking for ideas on what to trim down. Thanks so much for the help and advice. When Santa Fe New Mexico is...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-27-2011 03:38 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    02-27-2011, 07:15 PM Go to last post
  14. Moses Synopsis attempt #3

    Thanks for the advice on my other posts. Three questions: 1. What do you think of this 338 word synopsis? 2. Should I use multiple paragraphs?...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-27-2011 10:30 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-28-2011, 08:46 AM Go to last post
  15. Synergist: The Return of Judas - 3rd Query

    I started with a one page synopsis. But not on purpose, I just had a real hard time condensing the story into a standard query format. :) After...

    Started by Jordan Eddy‎, 03-01-2011 01:31 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    03-01-2011, 06:10 PM Go to last post
  16. LIVING IN SANITY 1st attempt query

    Any advice will be greatly appreciated. Please be brutally honest :). Specific Agent The Greatest Literary Agency Ever 101 I Want Your Book Ln....

    Started by Carolyn Arnold‎, 02-28-2011 03:56 PM
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    03-01-2011, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  17. Can I just send this one?

    Having fun tonight, maybe I'm feeling a little delirious or just going crazy. But this one was fun to write. Can I just call it a day/night and send...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-28-2011 07:27 PM
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    03-02-2011, 03:21 AM Go to last post
  18. The query that brought me to my knees...

    Hi everybody, I'd appreciate any tips or observations you might have on this query (good, bad, ugly, whatever). A wickedly sincere thank you to...

    Started by Esme Heidkamp‎, 02-27-2011 04:58 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    03-02-2011, 11:04 AM Go to last post
  19. Moses Query attempt #4

    So, Iíve been toying with the idea of using a scene from my book as the actually query letter. Hereís what I have, please let me know what you think....

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 03-01-2011 09:46 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-03-2011, 12:09 PM Go to last post
  20. YA Fantasy Query Suggestions

    I am soliciting thoughts on the query letter that I've pasted below. So far, this letter hasn't gotten a single nibble and I'm wondering what is...

    Started by Jill D.‎, 03-02-2011 08:24 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 1,005
    03-03-2011, 04:32 PM Go to last post

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