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  1. Re: NEED SERIOUS HELP

    Hoping I can get help with my query. I have already made some changes based on the advice of someone on WritersNet but need a couple more sets of...

    Started by r k‎, 10-14-2015 09:26 AM
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  2. Query Review: The Redder, revised.

    Dear Agent Hazel Wolfe has believed that the dark voice she’s been hearing since she was six years old has been a symptom to her Schizophrenia....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-06-2016 09:59 PM
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  3. critique my query letter?

    Hi all -- help is much appreciated. ~ = redacted Dear *agent*: My name is ~. I'm writing to query my completed 70,000 word novel...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-09-2011 12:16 PM
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  4. QUERY and SYNOPSIS STRUCTURE

    It might be useful to have this in a separate thread for easy reference. Important Disclaimer: These are my ideas on the differences between...

    Started by Stan Miller‎, 01-04-2011 07:24 PM
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  5. Query- Attempt # 7

    My wife tells me that the number of grey hairs on my head has tripled since I started the query letter writing process. Oh well, here goes nothing......

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-20-2011 08:42 AM
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  6. Query Letter: The Apprentice's Journey

    Hello everyone! I'm trying to publish my first novel, and naturally the first step is to get my query up to scratch :) I've posted this and...

    Started by Raxis‎, 02-11-2015 08:39 PM
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  7. Can I just send this one?

    Having fun tonight, maybe I'm feeling a little delirious or just going crazy. But this one was fun to write. Can I just call it a day/night and send...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-28-2011 07:27 PM
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  8. Query -- SUBSERVIA

    Hello All, Thanks in advance. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Must. Get. This. Right. :)-D SUBSERVIA is a 90,000-word...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-05-2011 09:51 PM
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    04-19-2011, 03:26 PM Go to last post
  9. Query: The Killing Past

    Hi all, I haven't been as active on this board as usual for the last several months because a lot has been going on...among other things, grinding...

    Started by John Hawkwood‎, 12-17-2011 12:14 PM
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  10. Some feedback please B)

    Post removed at Diane's request...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-12-2011 04:26 PM
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    04-18-2011, 01:26 AM Go to last post
  11. A more traditional query for St. JOHNS

    Gentle Readers Duval County Sheriff Harlan Lewis put on his poker face and crossed his arms. His head leaned back slightly and a squint crossed...

    Started by Craig‎, 02-12-2013 04:46 PM
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  12. Feedback for query letter please! :)

    I would really appreciate some feedback on this query letter please. Feel free to re-word things for a nicer flow. Dear Ms. Collins: Emilia...

    Started by cecilia-mar‎, 03-08-2016 12:19 PM
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  13. My Query Prompt: Space Opera Novel

    This is my first draft, I really have no clue as to how to structure these things. I always freeze up when people ask, "What's your story about?" so...

    Started by David Nova‎, 05-19-2011 02:35 PM
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  14. Edited Query for Non-Fiction

    If I may bother you one more time? Those of you who are not already sick and tired of this, and I could not blame you.... But I tried to...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-01-2011 04:54 AM
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  15. First query draft. Trying to get it all in.

    Dear I completed a book called I Told My Mind To Shut The F*ck Up, Seeing Past The Mind Created Story Of My Life. This 60,000 word memoir does...

    Started by greg winick‎, 01-27-2012 04:40 PM
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  16. YA SF Query Fourth attempt :)

    Hello! First - a huge thanks for the help I've received so far. I've made a few changes in this one: Thrown in a little more about the plot. ...

    Started by Emily MacGowan‎, 05-09-2011 08:25 PM
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  17. Advise for 1st query letter

    This is my very 1st query letter written for my first novel, THE SECERT TO A GOOD MAN. I'm really unsure of what lit. agents are looking for in...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 09-16-2011 10:25 AM
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  18. A somewhat different approach (attempt #4:))

    Sorry I'm such a pest, and an obsessed pest at that. It seems I just can't put it aside for a while; this QL is haunting me 8-):D I was advised to...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-07-2011 11:55 PM
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  19. Another attempt - QL take XXXL

    As many of you know, I have struggled with my QL for my MS1 I have worked the H#ll out of the MS and have it pretty damn shiny - even if I do say...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 01-12-2011 01:37 PM
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  20. Query review, please

    Side note: First--Thank you to anyone that takes the time to critique this. Second--Having read some of the feeds about proper query etiquette, I...

    Started by Avonne Writer‎, 02-08-2011 12:52 PM
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    02-11-2011, 12:44 AM Go to last post

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