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  1. Query- Attempt # 7

    My wife tells me that the number of grey hairs on my head has tripled since I started the query letter writing process. Oh well, here goes nothing......

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-20-2011 09:42 AM
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    09-21-2011, 01:57 PM Go to last post
  2. Re: NEED SERIOUS HELP

    Hoping I can get help with my query. I have already made some changes based on the advice of someone on WritersNet but need a couple more sets of...

    Started by r k‎, 10-14-2015 10:26 AM
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  3. critique my query letter?

    Hi all -- help is much appreciated. ~ = redacted Dear *agent*: My name is ~. I'm writing to query my completed 70,000 word novel...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-09-2011 01:16 PM
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    08-10-2011, 06:03 PM Go to last post
  4. QUERY - Another Angle

    I'm trying, I swear to gosh I'm really trying. I've walked away from it, played with the kids, gone to the park, taken walks. I've left it alone. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-21-2011 12:49 PM
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    02-23-2011, 08:29 AM Go to last post
  5. QUERY and SYNOPSIS STRUCTURE

    It might be useful to have this in a separate thread for easy reference. Important Disclaimer: These are my ideas on the differences between...

    Started by Stan Miller‎, 01-04-2011 07:24 PM
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    04-19-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  6. Some feedback please B)

    Post removed at Diane's request...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-12-2011 05:26 PM
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    04-18-2011, 02:26 AM Go to last post
  7. Query: The Killing Past

    Hi all, I haven't been as active on this board as usual for the last several months because a lot has been going on...among other things, grinding...

    Started by John Hawkwood‎, 12-17-2011 12:14 PM
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    01-29-2012, 08:20 PM Go to last post
  8. Query -- SUBSERVIA

    Hello All, Thanks in advance. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Must. Get. This. Right. :)-D SUBSERVIA is a 90,000-word...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-05-2011 10:51 PM
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    04-19-2011, 04:26 PM Go to last post
  9. Query Review: The Redder, revised.

    Dear Agent Hazel Wolfe has believed that the dark voice she’s been hearing since she was six years old has been a symptom to her Schizophrenia....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-06-2016 10:59 PM
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    10-12-2016, 10:30 PM Go to last post
  10. Can I just send this one?

    Having fun tonight, maybe I'm feeling a little delirious or just going crazy. But this one was fun to write. Can I just call it a day/night and send...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-28-2011 07:27 PM
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    03-02-2011, 03:21 AM Go to last post
  11. Feedback for query letter please! :)

    I would really appreciate some feedback on this query letter please. Feel free to re-word things for a nicer flow. Dear Ms. Collins: Emilia...

    Started by cecilia-mar‎, 03-08-2016 12:19 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-09-2016, 12:07 PM Go to last post
  12. First query draft. Trying to get it all in.

    Dear I completed a book called I Told My Mind To Shut The F*ck Up, Seeing Past The Mind Created Story Of My Life. This 60,000 word memoir does...

    Started by greg winick‎, 01-27-2012 04:40 PM
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    01-31-2012, 04:22 PM Go to last post
  13. A more traditional query for St. JOHNS

    Gentle Readers Duval County Sheriff Harlan Lewis put on his poker face and crossed his arms. His head leaned back slightly and a squint crossed...

    Started by Craig‎, 02-12-2013 04:46 PM
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  14. Edited Query for Non-Fiction

    If I may bother you one more time? Those of you who are not already sick and tired of this, and I could not blame you.... But I tried to...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-01-2011 04:54 AM
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    02-03-2011, 09:49 AM Go to last post
  15. Critics welcome

    Sorry about the asterisks. The IPad seems to force them in. Republican Aftermath Daniel Prescott hates the Republican Party. As a retired...

    Started by Liberal‎, 07-14-2012 12:35 PM
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    07-24-2012, 07:03 PM Go to last post
  16. Query Letter: Leap Forward

    Hey! This is the second query letter that I mentioned earlier. In this query I try out the name Leap Forward instead of Keep Faith. It's the...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-10-2014 10:08 AM
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    12-20-2014, 03:30 PM Go to last post
  17. Query review, please

    Side note: First--Thank you to anyone that takes the time to critique this. Second--Having read some of the feeds about proper query etiquette, I...

    Started by Avonne Writer‎, 02-08-2011 12:52 PM
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    02-11-2011, 12:44 AM Go to last post
  18. Advise for 1st query letter

    This is my very 1st query letter written for my first novel, THE SECERT TO A GOOD MAN. I'm really unsure of what lit. agents are looking for in...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 09-16-2011 11:25 AM
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    09-18-2011, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  19. A somewhat different approach (attempt #4:))

    Sorry I'm such a pest, and an obsessed pest at that. It seems I just can't put it aside for a while; this QL is haunting me 8-):D I was advised to...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-08-2011 12:55 AM
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    05-03-2011, 11:40 PM Go to last post
  20. YA SF Query Fourth attempt :)

    Hello! First - a huge thanks for the help I've received so far. I've made a few changes in this one: Thrown in a little more about the plot. ...

    Started by Emily MacGowan‎, 05-09-2011 09:25 PM
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    08-07-2011, 05:58 AM Go to last post

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