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  1. QUERY CRITIQUE - again

    Here is the latest query I've done after the wonderful feedback from you guys on here. Thank you for getting me this far. If there are glaring...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 03-06-2011 05:29 AM
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    03-07-2011, 12:38 PM Go to last post
  2. Query Attempt #1000

    I've taken everyone's advice and tried to show who Chloe is, her conflict and what she must do. Is this on the right track or am I still going the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-15-2011 07:21 AM
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    • Replies: 36
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    02-18-2011, 11:42 AM Go to last post
  3. QUERY CRITIQUE - Is this anything?

    This is simply a start and I was wondering if I am on to anything? It's not complete, but I wanted to post the first two paragraphs to see if I'm...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-27-2011 08:32 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    01-28-2011, 11:50 AM Go to last post
  4. Please critique, thanks (Day of Dreams, 3rd attempt)

    I've tried to take the feedback I've heard from my earlier versions and craft something new. Other than the first and last sentences, I've rewritten...

    Started by Ananth Krishna‎, 03-21-2011 07:37 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-28-2011, 02:59 AM Go to last post
  5. 2nd Attempt: DAY OF DREAMS

    The feedback from the previous version was that I had managed to make the concept interesting, but failed to show enough voice or build up the...

    Started by Ananth Krishna‎, 03-14-2011 08:50 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    03-14-2011, 04:52 PM Go to last post
  6. Query help (Literary Fiction, or something like it)

    I posted a query on these forums a few months ago and realized very quickly that I needed to start from scratch. Here's my next attempt, although I...

    Started by Ananth Krishna‎, 03-07-2011 10:08 PM
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    03-10-2011, 10:31 AM Go to last post
  7. Moses query attempt #? please critique

    Minus intriductions. I have included some notes in red (things I'm not sure I like all that much) Also please tell me what you think of the query...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-18-2011 11:52 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    04-20-2011, 08:23 AM Go to last post
  8. Moses polished query PLEASE critique

    Minus introductions Dear Joe Blow, I hope my query finds you well. In the world of Wall Street vs. Main Street, Noah fit somewhere between “I...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-13-2011 08:08 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,342
    04-13-2011, 11:48 PM Go to last post
  9. Moses query, PLEASE critique

    I have left out introductions. Please let me know what you think about the first part. After that I have some text in red and some in blue. I'm not...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-09-2011 10:21 PM
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    04-19-2011, 10:23 AM Go to last post
  10. MOSES new query attempt

    Excluding introductions and contact info. After an unprecedented political and military blunder, the US enters a new Depression era. The...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-05-2011 10:41 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 2,557
    04-06-2011, 09:14 AM Go to last post
  11. Moses query, last attempt

    Opinions, advice? would appreciate sincerity. I've excluded the dear agent and thank you obviously. After an unprecedented political and...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 03-04-2011 11:23 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 955
    03-05-2011, 09:46 AM Go to last post
  12. Moses Query attempt #4

    So, I’ve been toying with the idea of using a scene from my book as the actually query letter. Here’s what I have, please let me know what you think....

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 03-01-2011 09:46 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 952
    03-03-2011, 12:09 PM Go to last post
  13. Moses Synopsis attempt #3

    Thanks for the advice on my other posts. Three questions: 1. What do you think of this 338 word synopsis? 2. Should I use multiple paragraphs?...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-27-2011 10:30 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-28-2011, 08:46 AM Go to last post
  14. Moses synopsis advice attempt #2

    Here is my long synopsis, I am looking for ideas on what to trim down. Thanks so much for the help and advice. When Santa Fe New Mexico is...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-27-2011 03:38 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    02-27-2011, 07:15 PM Go to last post
  15. Bio, advice please

    First of all, thanks in advance for the advice, I hope some day I'm worthy enough to offer some of my own to other writers. Here is my bio, please...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-19-2011 11:36 PM
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    03-09-2011, 03:40 PM Go to last post
  16. Synopsis PLEASE critique

    Looking for opinions on my following query letter, can anyone shoot me some advice? Attention: Joe Blow Thanks in advance for the consideration...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-19-2011 01:48 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 866
    02-20-2011, 11:10 PM Go to last post
  17. Query Critique Request

    Dear ______, Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I am seeking representation for REVOLT, a 71,000-word young adult dystopian style...

    Started by ArcadiaE‎, 07-07-2016 11:07 AM
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    07-08-2016, 03:33 AM Go to last post
  18. Puttin' it out there

    Anyway, this is my Middle Grade novel. I'm working the editing and rewrites right now, but trying to put together a workable Q, as I know this can...

    Started by Avonne Writer‎, 03-23-2011 01:11 AM
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    03-28-2011, 04:28 PM Go to last post
  19. Query review, please

    Side note: First--Thank you to anyone that takes the time to critique this. Second--Having read some of the feeds about proper query etiquette, I...

    Started by Avonne Writer‎, 02-08-2011 12:52 PM
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    02-11-2011, 12:44 AM Go to last post
  20. Wink Query: Clock Face Twelve (Steampunk YA)

    Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Kalen Holloway watches time slip away. She has waited years, weeks, hours, seconds for her 15th birthday—time’s an easy thing...

    Started by Baka_Alchemist‎, 12-20-2014 03:33 PM
    advice wanted, query, steampunk, young adult
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 3,982
    02-02-2015, 01:17 PM Go to last post

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