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  1. Query: Baron von Prindles Parade

    Fist draft. Baron von Prindel embarks on a perilous journey with his talkative companions, Hopper, an energetic and loyal dog, and Maroon, his...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 09-18-2013 08:20 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    09-19-2013, 01:07 PM Go to last post
  2. Query: Lucky

    Now that I've completed the conversion of the story from third-person to first-person (along with upgrading the operating system on my computer in...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 06-10-2013 08:09 PM
    5 Pages
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    • Replies: 45
    • Views: 22,842
    07-13-2013, 01:44 PM Go to last post
  3. Arrow First Draft Query Letter

    “We could be so happy if you would only let my family control our marriage.” Spouses from dysfunctional families never actually utter these words...

    Started by BookWerm‎, 05-29-2013 05:47 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 2,725
    05-31-2013, 12:14 PM Go to last post
  4. Will a novel work if the main character is unlikeable?

    I was married three times and my last two husbands died. I want to write about these events but not as a grief story. The heroine (me) is a kind of...

    Started by Pines223‎, 04-26-2013 11:35 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,494
    05-24-2013, 02:27 PM Go to last post
  5. First Draft Query

    "Dear The now retired British spy reflects on the intrigue and near death experience of his wife at the hands of a counterspy from Canada. With...

    Started by Silverback‎, 05-06-2013 06:31 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 1,789
    05-21-2013, 09:00 PM Go to last post
  6. Another take on St. Johns

    I have mulled this over for quite a while and I hope it works better. Thanks in advance for any comments For several years all of the Federal Law...

    Started by Craig‎, 05-07-2013 05:31 PM
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    • Replies: 13
    • Views: 2,675
    05-18-2013, 02:19 PM Go to last post
  7. Query YA thriller

    This is probably overstepping my welcome, since I'm strictly a lurker on this site, but I'm attempting to write my first query letter and it's...

    Started by weavergirl‎, 05-14-2013 08:41 AM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 1,534
    05-17-2013, 11:31 AM Go to last post
  8. Query YA Fantasy

    This is the synopsis part of my query letter. Please let me know if this approach works for you guys and any other flaws you see. Thanks. ...

    Started by The Tainted‎, 05-15-2013 11:52 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 890
    05-15-2013, 12:08 PM Go to last post
  9. Query Feedback Please

    Being a first time novelist, never having went the route of attempting to find representation before, I would very much appreciate feedback on the...

    Started by matthewkeith‎, 05-06-2013 07:40 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 896
    05-06-2013, 05:06 PM Go to last post
  10. Query: Simulated Murder

    We're far enough into the story over in the Writing Critique forum that everyone should have a pretty good idea about the basic plot of the book. I...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 03-07-2013 08:06 PM
    7 Pages
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    • Replies: 67
    • Views: 8,306
    04-28-2013, 01:06 PM Go to last post
  11. Query: WotWB

    While I'm waiting for that 6-figure advance for Simulated Murder, I thought I'd give some thought to my next writing project. I always have at least...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 03-30-2013 10:21 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 1,823
    04-04-2013, 04:19 AM Go to last post
  12. Query Take 2

    I mostly rewrote the second paragraph for this. Probably needs to trim some of the wording a bit. Anyone want to take a stab at it? When...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 10-25-2012 11:38 AM
    simon sucks
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 1,614
    04-03-2013, 01:19 PM Go to last post
  13. Query: The Great Turbulence and Malcontent of Brimley Tinderbuss

    Dear Agent, In 1665 London, Brimley Tinderbuss writes sharp criticisms of King Charles II's tax-heavy reign. His treasonous words earn him...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 04-02-2013 10:41 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,015
    04-03-2013, 10:03 AM Go to last post
  14. Dante, Son of Lucifer

    Hello. This is my querry letter for my first ms, "Dante, son of Lucifer". I would be happy to get some feedback on it. And thanks in advance. Dear...

    Started by royboy‎, 03-26-2013 09:44 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 950
    03-27-2013, 05:37 AM Go to last post
  15. YA Query Draft

    No need to spend a lot of time on this -- just interested in first impressions: When everybody 15-year-old Tessie McVie hangs with looks at a...

    Started by Lawrence Tabak‎, 03-16-2013 05:42 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,211
    03-18-2013, 07:44 AM Go to last post
  16. What is this??

    Okay, it might be a dumb question, but I am at that stage where I don't even know my own name! Is the following the start of a query, or the start...

    Started by Debbi V‎, 03-01-2013 04:19 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 1,694
    03-04-2013, 10:53 AM Go to last post
  17. A more traditional query for St. JOHNS

    Gentle Readers Duval County Sheriff Harlan Lewis put on his poker face and crossed his arms. His head leaned back slightly and a squint crossed...

    Started by Craig‎, 02-12-2013 04:46 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 18
    • Views: 2,504
    03-02-2013, 06:13 AM Go to last post
  18. Rise of the South By: Mark Raines

    A Socialist society is being forced by the United States White House Administration. President Salman Usama has promised to “fundamentally transform...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-23-2013 08:30 PM
    7 Pages
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    • Replies: 64
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    03-01-2013, 01:53 PM Go to last post
  19. Query letter for unconventional project--critiques please!

    Some of you might have seen my post asking about the feasibility of submitting a book of three related novellas to agents. From responses here, other...

    Started by larkenfoam‎, 02-18-2013 07:22 PM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 835
    02-26-2013, 08:29 AM Go to last post
  20. Query-The Great Turbulance............... Help!

    The Great Turbulence and Malcontent of Brimley Tinderbuss In 1665 London, Brimley openly criticizes King Charles II's tax-heavy rule with his...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 02-16-2013 03:18 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,015
    02-18-2013, 01:14 PM Go to last post

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