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  1. Query - The Dark Syndicate

    To Agent: Two sisters start recruiting a band of misfit minions to take revenge on Heaven and Hell, little do they know, one minion will change...

    Started by Kessar‎, 01-25-2015 10:33 PM
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    • Replies: 15
    • Views: 3,697
    02-06-2015, 03:08 AM Go to last post
  2. Gifted (YA Sci-Fi)

    Just got finished with my book. I've been getting some great feedback for my query letter so far and just want to get some more thoughts on it before...

    Started by writerdude‎, 02-02-2015 12:00 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,472
    02-04-2015, 02:58 PM Go to last post
  3. Wink Query: Clock Face Twelve (Steampunk YA)

    Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Kalen Holloway watches time slip away. She has waited years, weeks, hours, seconds for her 15th birthday—time’s an easy thing...

    Started by Baka_Alchemist‎, 12-20-2014 02:33 PM
    advice wanted, query, steampunk, young adult
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 2,366
    02-02-2015, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  4. Query Letter: Leap Forward

    Hey! This is the second query letter that I mentioned earlier. In this query I try out the name Leap Forward instead of Keep Faith. It's the...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-10-2014 09:08 AM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 5,195
    12-20-2014, 02:30 PM Go to last post
  5. Another Taint in Putnam query

    Just to liven things up, it has been really dead around here, I offer another query. Enjoy. Micah Johnson was getting closer. The restaurant was...

    Started by Craig‎, 11-09-2014 05:55 AM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 1,754
    11-10-2014, 10:19 AM Go to last post
  6. Query Letter: Keep Faith

    Hello Everyone! Hope everyone is doing well :). Below is one of the query letters I've written for my realistic young adult story, Keep Faith. ...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-08-2014 04:20 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,945
    08-09-2014, 06:29 PM Go to last post
  7. Query - DAY OF THE BLACK MOON (revised)

    Hello everyone, We got some great critiques last time, and we re-worked the query and are posting it again. Once again, any feedback is...

    Started by Toriel‎, 06-25-2014 08:51 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,532
    07-02-2014, 02:48 AM Go to last post
  8. New Query Letter GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY

    A HUGE thank you to everyone who commented on my last attempt. I agree that it was too vague and in my opinion boring. So I started again. I really...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 06-11-2014 12:24 PM
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    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 13,741
    06-16-2014, 08:43 AM Go to last post

    *Note: The italicized line is only left if the agent wants book comparisons. It's a co-authored multi-pov fantasy novel, so any advice is welcome. ...

    Started by Toriel‎, 06-08-2014 01:41 PM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 2,197
    06-10-2014, 04:45 PM Go to last post
  10. Query Letter- GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY (formerly The Ten Thousand Steps to Goodbye)

    Well I took all your good advice to heart and rewrote my query letter about a dozen times and re-titled my book too. I am submitting it your chopping...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 05-29-2014 11:20 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,473
    06-08-2014, 01:33 PM Go to last post
  11. More like a blurb, trying to shape into a Query Letter eventually

    Hello everyone, I have read through a few of the query letters posted here, and saw the archers lining up thereafter to let the arrows fly. I'd...

    Started by JupiterInRetrograde‎, 06-03-2014 03:39 PM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 1,369
    06-03-2014, 03:39 PM Go to last post
  12. New version of query letter

    I'm throwing out the chum!! Dear Agent Fantastic, For thousands of years, the name "Medusa" has inspired dread -- a beautiful but dangerous...

    Started by Naomi B.‎, 04-22-2014 10:05 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 3,411
    04-23-2014, 03:33 AM Go to last post
  13. Query - Siren Pacific

    Well, here it goes. Any suggestions you have to improve my query letter would be most appreciated. Thanks! Dear Agent: (Of course, I would have...

    Started by Beth‎, 04-03-2013 07:38 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 15
    • Views: 15,083
    04-21-2014, 07:06 PM Go to last post
  14. Query: A TAINT IN PUTNAM

    Gentle readers, lurkers and you trolls, I rewrote the time line because I just couldn’t get a query together. I have some questions about this one...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-31-2014 03:45 PM
    5 Pages
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    • Replies: 41
    • Views: 22,611
    04-15-2014, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  15. Query Letter/ feedback please

    Hello people. I'd love some feedback on my festering turd of a query letter. Thanks! Dear Agent, Stepping into adulthood is an elaborate...

    Started by Naomi B.‎, 03-23-2014 11:17 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 12
    • Views: 11,810
    03-29-2014, 05:08 AM Go to last post
  16. Query Letter/ The Warden

    Dear Unnamed Agent: Living in the shadow of a mountain prison, Devin Abernathy can’t escape the watching eyes. The ever present Wardens serve as...

    Started by jessgallison‎, 03-06-2014 05:00 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 2,816
    03-10-2014, 03:48 PM Go to last post

    Hello all. I have just finished a draft of my query letter and I'd appreciate some feedback. It's hard to step back and see it through the eyes of...

    Started by WALTW‎, 01-15-2014 05:37 PM
    2 Pages
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    query letter help
    • Replies: 13
    • Views: 13,053
    03-07-2014, 07:06 AM Go to last post

    Hi Everyone. I could really use some feedback on my query letter. I am finding it especially difficult to write since my novel is narrative fiction...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 02-11-2014 10:59 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 2,640
    02-12-2014, 08:11 AM Go to last post
  19. Wink Query: DEVIANT (YA urban fantasy)

    This is a heavily revised query. I've gotten advice from professionals at Writer's Digest and other forums around the web. I'm querying soon and I...

    Started by Marc Ezra‎, 12-01-2013 06:28 PM
    fantasy, fiction, urban fantasy, young adult
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 2,234
    12-02-2013, 11:49 AM Go to last post
  20. Death has a Daughter Query help

    Dear Agent: Some call them the angels of death. Cendall prefers reaper, but if you want to be technical you can throw the word grim in front of...

    Started by candygirlraupp‎, 10-24-2013 05:46 PM
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    • Replies: 35
    • Views: 24,465
    11-11-2013, 04:56 AM Go to last post

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