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  1. Query Letter YA

    Hey all :) I'm in the midst of crafting a query letter, but I'm getting mixed reviews from people. So far, the consensus had been that it was too...

    Started by TiffanyAnne‎, 06-05-2015 02:44 PM
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    06-06-2015, 06:46 AM Go to last post
  2. Query YA

    Hello everybody! I really need your help with my query letter. Right now I'm just trying to write the paragraphs describing my novel... All advice...

    Started by Marian‎, 03-18-2015 12:24 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    03-19-2015, 06:55 AM Go to last post
  3. Query Letter

    This is my first attempt at writing a query. Constructive criticism and suggestions appreciated. Dear , Lil Harper is grief-stricken following...

    Started by tjm‎, 03-09-2015 08:36 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    03-09-2015, 08:50 AM Go to last post
  4. Query Letter: The Apprentice's Journey

    Hello everyone! I'm trying to publish my first novel, and naturally the first step is to get my query up to scratch :) I've posted this and...

    Started by Raxis‎, 02-11-2015 07:39 PM
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    03-04-2015, 07:56 AM Go to last post
  5. Query - The Dark Syndicate

    To Agent: Two sisters start recruiting a band of misfit minions to take revenge on Heaven and Hell, little do they know, one minion will change...

    Started by Kessar‎, 01-25-2015 10:33 PM
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    02-06-2015, 03:08 AM Go to last post
  6. Gifted (YA Sci-Fi)

    Just got finished with my book. I've been getting some great feedback for my query letter so far and just want to get some more thoughts on it before...

    Started by writerdude‎, 02-02-2015 12:00 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-04-2015, 02:58 PM Go to last post
  7. Wink Query: Clock Face Twelve (Steampunk YA)

    Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Kalen Holloway watches time slip away. She has waited years, weeks, hours, seconds for her 15th birthday—time’s an easy thing...

    Started by Baka_Alchemist‎, 12-20-2014 02:33 PM
    advice wanted, query, steampunk, young adult
    • Replies: 9
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    02-02-2015, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  8. Query Letter: Leap Forward

    Hey! This is the second query letter that I mentioned earlier. In this query I try out the name Leap Forward instead of Keep Faith. It's the...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-10-2014 09:08 AM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 5,380
    12-20-2014, 02:30 PM Go to last post
  9. Another Taint in Putnam query

    Just to liven things up, it has been really dead around here, I offer another query. Enjoy. Micah Johnson was getting closer. The restaurant was...

    Started by Craig‎, 11-09-2014 05:55 AM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 1,869
    11-10-2014, 10:19 AM Go to last post
  10. Query Letter: Keep Faith

    Hello Everyone! Hope everyone is doing well :). Below is one of the query letters I've written for my realistic young adult story, Keep Faith. ...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-08-2014 04:20 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 2,042
    08-09-2014, 06:29 PM Go to last post
  11. Query - DAY OF THE BLACK MOON (revised)

    Hello everyone, We got some great critiques last time, and we re-worked the query and are posting it again. Once again, any feedback is...

    Started by Toriel‎, 06-25-2014 08:51 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,561
    07-02-2014, 02:48 AM Go to last post
  12. New Query Letter GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY

    A HUGE thank you to everyone who commented on my last attempt. I agree that it was too vague and in my opinion boring. So I started again. I really...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 06-11-2014 12:24 PM
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    06-16-2014, 08:43 AM Go to last post
  13. Query - DAY OF THE BLACK MOON

    *Note: The italicized line is only left if the agent wants book comparisons. It's a co-authored multi-pov fantasy novel, so any advice is welcome. ...

    Started by Toriel‎, 06-08-2014 01:41 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    06-10-2014, 04:45 PM Go to last post
  14. Query Letter- GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY (formerly The Ten Thousand Steps to Goodbye)

    Well I took all your good advice to heart and rewrote my query letter about a dozen times and re-titled my book too. I am submitting it your chopping...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 05-29-2014 11:20 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,546
    06-08-2014, 01:33 PM Go to last post
  15. More like a blurb, trying to shape into a Query Letter eventually

    Hello everyone, I have read through a few of the query letters posted here, and saw the archers lining up thereafter to let the arrows fly. I'd...

    Started by JupiterInRetrograde‎, 06-03-2014 03:39 PM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 1,412
    06-03-2014, 03:39 PM Go to last post
  16. New version of query letter

    I'm throwing out the chum!! Dear Agent Fantastic, For thousands of years, the name "Medusa" has inspired dread -- a beautiful but dangerous...

    Started by Naomi B.‎, 04-22-2014 10:05 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    04-23-2014, 03:33 AM Go to last post
  17. Query - Siren Pacific

    Well, here it goes. Any suggestions you have to improve my query letter would be most appreciated. Thanks! Dear Agent: (Of course, I would have...

    Started by Beth‎, 04-03-2013 07:38 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    04-21-2014, 07:06 PM Go to last post
  18. Query: A TAINT IN PUTNAM

    Gentle readers, lurkers and you trolls, I rewrote the time line because I just couldn’t get a query together. I have some questions about this one...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-31-2014 03:45 PM
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    • Replies: 41
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    04-15-2014, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  19. Query Letter/ feedback please

    Hello people. I'd love some feedback on my festering turd of a query letter. Thanks! Dear Agent, Stepping into adulthood is an elaborate...

    Started by Naomi B.‎, 03-23-2014 11:17 AM
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    • Replies: 12
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    03-29-2014, 05:08 AM Go to last post
  20. Query Letter/ The Warden

    Dear Unnamed Agent: Living in the shadow of a mountain prison, Devin Abernathy can’t escape the watching eyes. The ever present Wardens serve as...

    Started by jessgallison‎, 03-06-2014 05:00 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 2,921
    03-10-2014, 03:48 PM Go to last post

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