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  1. Query Help - Another attempt

    I have tried to take all the comments from before and incorporate them into this query by showing you Chloe and what she must do. That she is the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-07-2011 11:53 AM
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    02-12-2011, 02:47 PM Go to last post
  2. Two queries, which would you vote for? All comments welcome.

    hi guys, I've been bouncing between these two queries and it's driving me nuts. On the one hand i know query version 1 isn't perfect and still...

    Started by Cas Webb‎, 02-11-2011 10:56 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-12-2011, 11:12 AM Go to last post
  3. Requesting Query Feedback for a 1st Timer

    Hi All, I was hoping to get some critical feedback on the query letter below. I would really appreciate a new set of eyes. Please assume that the...

    Started by Jordan Eddy‎, 02-09-2011 11:23 AM
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    02-11-2011, 10:48 PM Go to last post
  4. Query review, please

    Side note: First--Thank you to anyone that takes the time to critique this. Second--Having read some of the feeds about proper query etiquette, I...

    Started by Avonne Writer‎, 02-08-2011 12:52 PM
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    02-11-2011, 12:44 AM Go to last post
  5. Would like to throw another V at you'all

    OK, I have listened and while I am not (just yet) willing to dump the first 50 pages I see everyones point that the story not about Cecilia's...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-05-2011 06:09 PM
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    02-08-2011, 01:22 AM Go to last post
  6. Seeking Feedback on Query Letter

    Dear Agent, Second sight isn't an exact science. At eighteen, Laurel Pierson misinterpreted a vision, leading to the death of Nate, her first...

    Started by Thomma Grindstaff‎, 02-04-2011 09:31 PM
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    02-07-2011, 11:09 AM Go to last post
  7. One more try: non-fiction

    I took the advice I got and really scaled it down, moved some things around to hopefully make it sound more interesting. In the interest of keeping...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-06-2011 01:22 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-06-2011, 04:15 PM Go to last post
  8. Query Help

    I seem to be stuck in query purgatory and I was wondering if this was getting close. I am still working on the final paragraph. I've tried to show...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-03-2011 09:32 AM
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    02-06-2011, 06:12 AM Go to last post
  9. Query Letter-I'm stuck. Help?

    I've rewritten my query letter countless times. I don't want to waste anyone's time with garbage but at this point I'm stuck. Am I on the right...

    Started by Adrienne Wenner‎, 02-03-2011 08:44 PM
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    02-06-2011, 05:54 AM Go to last post
  10. I think this is MUCH closer :)

    Taking a lot of advice, including getting some sleep (OK still not a full 8 hours as it's 3.15 am here, but 5 is better than 3!) and DK's starting...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-04-2011 08:22 AM
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    02-05-2011, 09:04 AM Go to last post
  11. QUERY CRITIQUE, if I may :)

    Thank you so much for your time and effort in advance :-) After an industrious three-days-browsing through every link and blog I was able to...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 01-29-2011 08:43 AM
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    02-04-2011, 06:33 PM Go to last post
  12. My query letter - any suggestions are good

    Dear agent: I am very excited about my recently completed manuscript; and after knowing about your agency for several years, I am delighted to get...

    Started by Jennifer Crunk‎, 02-01-2011 07:39 PM
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    02-03-2011, 04:17 PM Go to last post
  13. Righteo, trying an entirely different angle - QL

    So, as suggested, I'm trying this QL from a different angle. To be honest, I am living on very little sleep and even less food so I no longer have...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-03-2011 01:27 AM
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    02-03-2011, 11:59 AM Go to last post
  14. Edited Query for Non-Fiction

    If I may bother you one more time? Those of you who are not already sick and tired of this, and I could not blame you.... But I tried to...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-01-2011 04:54 AM
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    02-03-2011, 09:49 AM Go to last post
  15. QL Re-try Any better?

    Well it's 6.30am here and the sun is just coming out. I woke up to work on the at 4.30am so I'm giving it another go. Having taken time away from...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-02-2011 11:36 AM
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    02-03-2011, 12:43 AM Go to last post
  16. OK an new QL start only - Comments please

    Rather than work on the entire QL (which I am clearly failing at), I have decided to just start with the beginning. My feeling is that if the first...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-02-2011 09:13 PM
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    02-03-2011, 12:20 AM Go to last post
  17. Query for Non-fiction proposal

    Hi, this agency only takes non-fiction works, but also specifies that it is interested in queries before sending proposals. They also said it is...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-31-2011 05:11 AM
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    02-01-2011, 03:42 AM Go to last post
  18. New qurey--better?

    I rewrote it. What say you now? Please help. Insert editor name here Insert publisher name here Address Dear , Divorce has taken its...

    Started by Brad Mathews‎, 01-20-2011 10:25 AM
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    01-30-2011, 10:24 PM Go to last post
  19. Query Letter Critique, Please - YA Novel

    Hi, Everyone! I'm new to the forums, but I've really enjoyed them so far. It's obvious there is a lot of valuable feedback available. So, thanks...

    Started by Shannon Hubbard‎, 01-16-2011 10:02 AM
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    01-30-2011, 07:34 AM Go to last post
  20. Non-fiction query?

    Hi, I am sure this needs a lot more polishing, but I have seen how supportive you all are in helping everyone get the best possible query letter...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-16-2011 01:59 PM
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    01-30-2011, 06:05 AM Go to last post

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